The Way Down - Comments

something about the newest chapter made it one of my favorites yet! I can clearly picture them playing in the snow and that intense moment between them.

So glad I have insomnia! Well not really but on a night where you updated- yes. I can't believe he brought her coffee and he pulled her in next to him! You're writing is so on point: I picture everything crystal clear. Though, I'm nervous when Gabe wakes up. I feel he has huge feelings for her the same way Jeremy does.

I love drunk scenes where people open up just a little! I love these moments between them. I like how he admitted that she makes him nervous. I want to know how it goes from here! Do they go back to normal or do they avoid each other or do they get closer?!?

chapter 10 is amazing! I love how flustered he was when asking if she was okay. I really like Gabe as a person! My heart is torn but obviously I am shipping Casey with Jeremy. Just don't want Gabe's heart to break! Your writing is amazing!

This is super cute I love how awkward they are updated again soon

So I decided to make this one big comment! So far I’m on chapter 3! I love how detailed your writing is. It’s incredibly descriptive and captivates my attention. Your characters are easy to relate to and they are extremely realistic. So far my favorite line is the “keep moving” in chapter two! I love how so motion the initial fall is between Jeremy and Casey. I felt very giddy while reading it. Already ship them so hard even though much isn’t revealed about Jeremy’s personality. I enjoy the fact that both as socially awkward.

Just reached the end of chapter 3, loving the cliffhanger it leaves off at. I like how she locked herself away to catch her breath and think things through and as she walks out: there he is. Off to continue to read chapter 4!

“His strides were wide and fast, almost too much for someone as short as me to keep up with, I was practically jogging behind him.” I know this all too well. It makes me smile. My boyfriend walks so much fast that me that us short people really do have to jog to keep up with those long legs! And what was he going to ask her? I feel it was something very very personal! But it’s little cliffhangers like that, that keep the us reading…and beautiful writing.

Chapter 5 is by far my favorite! Chapter 2 following close behind. I never knew beach and vinegar is a poisonous gas when mixed together. Guess you do learn something new everyday!

started chapter 6 and I take back what I said: loving how chapter 6 is starting.

On chapter 7 now; I knew that creep would try and pull something. Cannot believe Natalie and Shae stayed on the same bus as him! And I like how Casey was going to punch him but Jeremy got there first. Also, I like how brotherly Gabe is over Casey! But…is Jeremy acting jealous of how close Gabe and Casey are?

No. no. no. chapter 9 did not end like that.no. and I have to wait for chapter 10? Oh the agony. What does he want to talk about?

Well I am all caught up. I’m really loving this story. Cannot wait for the next update.

this is super cute! i only just started reading so give me a few days to write a more detailed comment!

I like it! I'm excited to read more!