The Way Down - Comments

Gabe is such an asshole! He's obviously not a real friend if he takes a stranger's word over Casey's. Honestly if I were Casey, I'd tell everyone how evil Marissa really is and the leave the tour. Casey doesn't deserve this kind of treatment and Marissa needs to grow the fuck up! It's not high school anymore!

I love this story so much, and your writing is incredible.

I'm completely content with letting Gabe and Marissa kiss. On the other hand, I'm hurting for Jeremy as he won't be able to kiss his love or show his affection for Casey. Amazing chapter as always :)

I wish she let Jeremy kick marissas ass loved the update as usual

Marissa is a psychotic bitch and Gabe is a disgusting creep...they deserve each other. Hopefully they both get kicked off the tour!

These last two chapters were intense. I loved every sentence of their intimacy. Your writing was whimsical. Absolutely stunning. I loved how protective and loving he got with her. Her story is so heart breaking.

She should have let Jeremy kick Marissa's ass >.<

I'm so glad that you updated! He's such a sweetheart, so caring and compassionate. I so hope that he's able to protect her from Marissa and that that chick finally gets put in her place. Waiting on baited breath for the next update!

New subscriber and I'm completely obsessed with this story haha. Just binge read all of the chapters! Can't wait for more and I will def be checking out any other stories you have.

I'm really happy she told Jeremy, I just really hope he believes her.

I need you to please update as soon as possible! This story is incredible

it doubled posted :( i'll save this spot for my next comment. or just write again how much I like this story?

edit: Gabe is cray-cray. Gosh, I don't know what to say about this chapter other than how amazing it was. The detail. The whole scene with Gabe made me think of Mulan when they discovered she was a girl. I know, I need to stop with the Disney references. I'm so sorry. But just the mood and high anxiety Casey was in felt so real.

Hardest chapter to read thus far. Oh wow. I could feel how alone she felt. It's probably the most difficult feeling in the world, feeling alone. I enjoyed the small blessing that is Jeremey. He obviously cares about her. Part of me hopes he is the one to catch on, but I also hope Casey finds the strength within to outsmart and take down Ursula or Marissa..whatever dat b*tch's name is.

love this story so much!

TWO UPDATES? ONE DAY!? WHHHHHATTTT. Good luck with your midterms. Cannot believe it's that time of year. This time last year, I slept through one of my midterms.

ANYWAYS, I was hoping Marissa would stick to Gabe. Maybe those two will fall desperately in love together. This is the longest day in Casey's life I bet. Oh man. Your writing is amazing. I feel Casey's fear when it comes to Marissa. I wonder what she could possibly do when it comes to everyone else. Jeremy is obvious, and I hope he sees right through it. Because that'd be epic.

Also, I love all the side parts that are going on. Like how Ryan came, and the mess he made. Also with Jeremy and Casey. Casey and Gabe. And now with Marissa. All these elements could overwhelm a plot/story but in your case, (lolz Case), it all adds up in a really nice way. It leads me to believe Casey could have a moment where she takes charge of each little conflict.

NOOOOOOO! My worst nightmare is happening. Can we just hope that Jeremy sees right through dis bitch? Ugggh. I was right. Marissa is Ursula. It's time to take down that sea witch but I have a feeling she is going to raise a bit of hell before her ass gets kicked by someone. I vote Casey to do it but I'd settle for Jeremy catching on quick and not falling for it.

So many reasons to love chapter 17! One: why do I feel like Marissa is going to pull an Ursula and steal Prince Eric (in our case, Jeremy) right out from Casey! Now all I can do is picture Casey to be played by Ariel. (I've been watching too much Disney movies as I am now comparing your stories to it)

Also! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! I really appreciate the way Casey responded to Gabe when he threw his little tantrum. It made him unattractive. I would have thrown my laptop out the window if she was like "yeah, okay Gabe. Let's ****".

CHILLS, DUDE, CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE! That was brilliantly written. This newest chapter was very cunning. You so sly!

“No, it is like that. You have to think about your career, Jeremy. Our career. She’s a distraction, especially now. There’s no point pursuing any of this. You said it yourself, it’s hard to talk to her, and now it’s hard to even look at her. This is like your freshman year of college all over again. Why are you torturing yourself? Just do yourself a favor and cut off this extra limb before it becomes more of a burden.”

Brilliantly spoken. the way this sounds outside of context. from an outsider's perspective, it looks exactly how Casey took it.

You tricked me! I definitely thought Ryan knew about Jeremey so I thought he left to go talk to Jeremey in secretase but that's not at all what happened! Oh man! I definitely thought Ryan was going to threaten Jeremey to stay away from his sister.

NOPE! Instead I have Ryan thinking Gabe is the boyfriend and a now broken, hearted (and probably stupid-prone) Jeremey. I sincerely hopes that boy doesn't do anything irrational! BE THE LEVEL-HEADED BOY I KNOW, JEREMEY!

I honestly hope Gabe finds someone else. I would hate for his heart to get broken because Casey doesn't feel the same why