Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You? - Comments

  • OverbearingStruggles

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    I can't believe it took me almost a month to get to this last chapter. I opened the link at least twice, would read a few chapters before, and then didn't want it to end. Geez this story has been an amazing ride from day one and I am so so so happy Jack got the family he wanted, even if the detours were wild. It was easy to be upset at Alex so many times but then just as easy to forgive.
    This whole thing has been fantastic and I'm so happy it exists. Easily one of my favorite fics of all time.
    December 19th, 2017 at 07:14am
  • kyleburns

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    i loved this :) i don't think I ever read the end in the google doc (maybe I did) but it's so good and I'm glad they got their happy ending!
    November 24th, 2017 at 03:01am
  • fifthghost

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    This was SUCH a lovely ending, I'm so happy you finished this. I almost expected there to be another chapter where Alex ends up in New York again deciding he wants Jack back after all, hahaha. This was so nice though, it wrapped everything up really well... BLESS. Jack got his little family. <3
    November 15th, 2017 at 01:39am
  • Breepocket

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    YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
    I'm sad it's over, but I'm so glad it's finished. Talk about a great way to start a Monday.
    November 13th, 2017 at 10:48pm
  • Boycattlove

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    Beautiful finish!!! Well worth the wait!!!! So so good I'm so glad we finally got this update!!
    November 13th, 2017 at 08:24pm
  • timebombxx

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    Excuse me, I need the next chapter. Please. And thank you. This is good stuff. :-)
    November 7th, 2017 at 11:54am
  • Forever Young.

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    It is literally about 85% percent done I definitely will be posting it soon!! Just been super distracted lately unfortunately :( so glad to hear you’re still interested in reading!
    October 20th, 2017 at 10:34pm
  • alltimeyo

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    hey i hope you're doing well and can update soon!
    October 20th, 2017 at 10:17pm
  • pya_amstail

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    Yea its definitely okay with the update. You can do it whenever you have time. Anyway, glad to hear you're doing well, xx
    August 23rd, 2017 at 02:48pm
  • Boycattlove

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    @ Forever Young.
    Sorry to hear about work but I'm just glad you're okay!! I checked in every few days to see if you had at least commented to say you're okay!! Take your time with the update, we don't mind waiting if you need time to recover from your hectic schedule
    August 21st, 2017 at 03:54am
  • Forever Young.

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    @ pya_amstail

    Omg I am so sorry that I have been MIA!! I had a really exhausting work schedule these past few months and had absolutely no time or energy to write much of anything in that time span. But I'm going to get back to writing this week and hopefully get this last update posted before the month is over!! Thank you all for commenting and checking in on me, truly appreciated :)
    August 20th, 2017 at 03:52am
  • pya_amstail

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    Please update oh my god, are you okay? It's been a while
    August 6th, 2017 at 09:10pm
  • alltimeyo

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    Please update when you can! I miss this story Sad
    July 14th, 2017 at 08:10am
  • ApathyForSympathy

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    So, since this fic hasn't been updated in a while I decided to read your other fics (cause I love how you write) and I found out that a lot of fics I've read in the last few years (and loved) are yours! You're such a talented writer and rereading your fics was a delight, and the other ones I hadn't previously read were awesome too. The only "bad" thing is that some weren't completed so I'm never gonna find out if Jack is a good team captain and is gonna get moved into the major league (I don't know anything about baseball lol) or if Alex will ever get his memories back, but I'm weirdly okay with that cause I've read almost all of your other completed fics and they were so good, lol. So yeah, I just wanted to let you know that I love basically everything you write and I can't wait for this fic to be updated cause I love it. Have a good day :)
    July 12th, 2017 at 07:27pm
  • Boycattlove

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    Are you okay? It's been a while so I just want to make sure everything is okay!!
    June 18th, 2017 at 02:56am
  • Katiemacx14

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    truly love this
    June 11th, 2017 at 07:35am
  • Forever Young.

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    Omg I know I'm sooooo late with this last chapter but I promise I am working on it! Hopefully by this Saturday!!
    May 31st, 2017 at 08:05pm
  • Boycattlove

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    Any time in takes you a little bit to update I always check the comments to see if you've left any updates on when you'll put up the new chapter lmaoo, hope all is well!!
    May 31st, 2017 at 07:01pm
  • m0riarty

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    UPDATE !
    May 18th, 2017 at 06:54pm
  • fifthghost

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    Chapter nineteen is cute and I'm soooooo excited for Alex to introduce Daniel to his parents lmfao I'm not sure what I'm expecting but it's going to be good.

    Also this part made me laugh aloud:

    “You're giving me angina,” Sierra mumbles under her breath, puts her blinker on as the exit comes up.
    “What the fuck is angina?”
    “It’s - nevermind. Why don't you double check your bag again before we get there.”

    I just read Alex's mom meeting Daniel and I do actually have tears in my eyes??? Like I don't quite know why??? His mom is just so ready to take on this new obstacle and Alex is so changed and I just???? My heart????

    For once I actually like what Zack has to say lol. He's kinda right for not giving Jack more advice too, like. It's not something Jack can let someone else decide for him. I'M STILL SO HEARTBROKEN FOR DAVE THOUGH, ESPECIALLY AFTER THE FLASHBACK COS THAT WAS ADORABLE.

    God damn. Okay, I'm all caught up and now I feel guilt-free because of that hahahaha. Excited for more! I know there can't be that much left now.
    April 18th, 2017 at 01:53am