Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You? - Comments

  • fifthghost

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    I'm reading chapter seventeen and holy fuck Jack is really going for this rant omgnfhjsfgdh. I'm dead.

    OKAY I KNEW THEY WERE GONNA FUCK AT SOME POINT, OBVIOUSLY. But the fact that they're just chilling in Jack's bed afterwards omg suhdgjokh if I was Alex I don't think I'd be able to relax like what if Dave popped over unexpectedly. And even if he didn't, THIS IS A MESS. But the porn was good. The porn makes up for the anxiety I am having omg.

    I'm stressed about the flashback as well like there's still a huge chunk of this chapter to go ahhHHHH.

    ALEX'S COMMENT ABOUT NEVER HAVING A BABY HAHAHAHA OH BOY LOOK AT U NOW. I know an argument's coming and I feel like it's gonna be something huge to counter the fact they just slept together in the present oh godddd stand by for tears if this is their break-up tbh.

    ......I FINISHED THE CHAPTER and I didn't think I would ACTUALLY cry but I'm like nearly on the verge of tears omg what a mess. I really don't know how I'd react if I were Jack cos that SUCKS. God dammit Alex. And yet here he is with a baby. I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I'm reading eighteen now and I literally can't believe they're having sex AGAIN oh my god boys pls. Reading about them showering together is making me so sad because it's so soft and couple-y and they've got a baby that isn't theirs (well, not Jack's) sleeping in the next room and it's not gonna last. And this conversation on Jack's bed is PAINFUL they're just finally being so real with each other but )))):

    Reading about them tidy up before Dave comes home is STRESSING ME MORE and I just got to the part where Dave has come home and like. You didn't mention them throwing away the condoms from Jack's garbage and I really don't want Dave to find out that way but I'm right aren't I.

    .....IM RIGHT AND I HATE EVERYTHING POOR DAVE I KNOW WE ALL WANT JALEX TO GET TOGETHER AGAIN BUT POOOOOOOR DAVE I wanna smash Jack's head into the mirror too

    I feel SO sorry for Alex and Dave. Like mostly Dave because he just got cheated on twice (technically three times if you count the kiss) and Jack didn't even have the balls to tell him but Alex because damn Jack's being so shitty right now omg. I'm SHOOK that Alex left too though.

    I like the flashback in eighteen but it makes me kinda sad to think Alex was just sort of drifting through and going through the motions rather than actually living.
    April 17th, 2017 at 07:30pm
  • Supersonicskyline

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    love this story so much! thank you for updating <3
    April 17th, 2017 at 11:05am
  • fifthghost

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    edit: (also sorry that that just posted twice, Mibba logged me out and posted the comment then I logged back in and it seemed to repost?? idk oh well)

    Okay, skimmed fourteen again and I remember feeling so bad for Dave and only a tiny bit sorry for Jack. Mostly laughing at how John just fucking knows and the cute little smutty flashback. And I just skimmed fifteen and realised I did read that one sifugjdok so it MUST be sixteen I'm catching up from because I know I missed more than one chapter.

    Okay I'm reading sixteen and I am still in DISBELIEFFFFFFF that Alex isn't telling his parents about Daniel like oh my god it's just giving me anxiety now. But omg that phone call with Nicole. GO ALEX.

    omg Jack ranting to Zack about Alex sifugjdohpj I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. Ohhhhh boy.

    I just finished the flashback in chapter sixteen and I'm YELLING, I'm starting to think Alex left him at the fucking alter or something, oh my God. The fact that you're saying seventeen is your fave chapter now is making me NERVOUS. Here I go.
    April 17th, 2017 at 01:33am
  • Okay, skimmed fourteen again and I remember feeling so bad for Dave and only a tiny bit sorry for Jack. Mostly laughing at how John just fucking knows and the cute little smutty flashback. And I just skimmed fifteen and realised I did read that one sifugjdok so it MUST be sixteen I'm catching up from because I know I missed more than one chapter.

    Okay I'm reading sixteen and I am still in DISBELIEFFFFFFF that Alex isn't telling his parents about Daniel like oh my god it's just giving me anxiety now. But omg that phone call with Nicole. GO ALEX.

    omg Jack ranting to Zack about Alex sifugjdohpj I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. Ohhhhh boy.

    I just finished the flashback in chapter sixteen and I'm YELLING, I'm starting to think Alex left him at the fucking alter or something, oh my God. The fact that you're saying seventeen is your fave chapter now is making me NERVOUS. Here I go.
    April 17th, 2017 at 01:32am
  • fifthghost

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    I'm back to catching up with this! I got really busy and then I was following All Time Low on their tour cos I'm a whipped bitch so I didn't really have time for anything but goddamn I missed this story. So I'm skimming from chapter thirteen which I know I already read and freaked out about, and I think also chapter fourteen? But I don't think I read from fifteen onwards so prepare for an influx of comments cos I'll probably read it all over the next couple of hours omg.
    April 16th, 2017 at 06:02pm
  • mbphan

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    Yay! So happy to see the update!
    April 14th, 2017 at 06:33am
  • m0riarty

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    finally omg i was abt to go berserk
    April 13th, 2017 at 07:38pm
  • northshore

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    I missed this so much
    Loved every moment of the bee chapter although I'm definitely missing some cute Jalex here
    April 13th, 2017 at 08:16am
  • ellzbellz2000

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    AAAHHH FINALLYYYY. so good.
    April 13th, 2017 at 02:36am
  • ajones3

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    YASSSSS IM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED TODAY *-*
    Alex doesn't deserve Jack, I can't believe he's left again, just like that :(
    I'm happy he's told his parents about Daniel tho!
    I love this, thank you flr sharing!! .x
    April 13th, 2017 at 02:02am
  • Nerd.otaku

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    yeyyyy way better than any Easter egg!
    April 12th, 2017 at 03:12pm
  • ajones3

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    OH MY GOD, it's 3.30am I have been reading for hours now and I'm gomna scream oh my god!
    I just read you're still writing which makes me SO happy because I need to know more!
    I've been looking for a fic to get me hooked like this for weeks and you did it and jeeeeez, I'm gonna shut up now, but pls pleeeeease finish this I'm begging you.
    Thank you for sharing this!
    .x
    April 12th, 2017 at 04:23am
  • Forever Young.

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    @ Nerd.otaku
    I'll be updating tomorrow probably! I have it written, just waiting for my beta to read it through for mistakes! :)
    April 12th, 2017 at 01:49am
  • Nerd.otaku

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    ohmygoodness I need to know what happens next, this fic is life and I love you for writing it
    March 31st, 2017 at 08:55am
  • Forever Young.

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    @ Boycattlove
    Ahhhh I know I'm so sorry it's been so long!! I haven't abandoned this fic - Ive just had a lot going on and a bit of writers block. I promise I'm almost done with the next chapter!
    March 31st, 2017 at 06:17am
  • Boycattlove

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    Can't wait for when you get some free time to update!! Love this fic
    March 31st, 2017 at 05:58am
  • alltimeyo

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    Please update when you can! I love and miss this fic
    March 22nd, 2017 at 12:57pm
  • ellzbellz2000

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    Absolutely love this story, cannot wait for the update. Please make them end up together with jacks perfect family life that he's always wanted with Alex but now Alex has realized that he wants that too. Please. I won't be able to handle it hahaha
    March 19th, 2017 at 10:29am
  • pya_amstail

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    @ Forever Young.
    About the update days schedule. No big deal. Also, thank you sooo much
    March 18th, 2017 at 03:13pm
  • Forever Young.

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    @ pya_amstail
    Hopefully by Sunday, I've been super busy lately. What are you so confused about?
    March 18th, 2017 at 04:46am