Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You? - Comments

  • silver_ice

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    Dude. I love the way you write. I literally just sat here the last few hours to read all of this 'cause I had to know what happened next. Looking forward to your next update.
    December 30th, 2016 at 02:25am
  • Dreamuser

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    I'm laughing so hard at Jack in this chapter. The sweatpants thing and the way they fell asleep...I love how detailed this story is. You're seriously a great writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    December 29th, 2016 at 07:26pm
  • fifthghost

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    I FINALLY got to catch up with this chapter and it's so cute. ): I'm feeling bad for Dave now cos I mean... it is weird. I'm actually giving him some kudos cos if Jack was my boyfriend and he was suddenly all involved with his ex's problems, new baby, and inviting him to literally live in his house... I'd probably kill him.

    I'm nervous now that it's got them in college in the flashbacks now though. Creeping ever closer to what I'm sure will be an extremely painful break-up. :') I feel like Alex seems to be coming into his own a little more at college though and it's sweet; where did it all go wrong, hahahaha. Now he has a kid. What a dummy.

    Excited for the next update!
    December 28th, 2016 at 03:34am
  • DvwBCyzU

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    Still loving this story! I'm so excited to learn why they broke up and see them rekindle something somehow!
    December 26th, 2016 at 02:30am
  • Dreamuser

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    It's just so good!!! This is like a Christmas present for me, so thanks and merry Christmas!!
    December 24th, 2016 at 06:17pm
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    your fics are the best of the best i stg
    December 22nd, 2016 at 08:27pm
  • OverbearingStruggles

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    "They probably think he’s a cool, single dad with his whole life put together. Jokes on them. Alex is a trainwreck."
    This made me snort.
    December 22nd, 2016 at 04:02am
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    @ Forever Young.
    I literally just realised it's Saturday so you're fine hahaha. Reasons someone needs to hire me ASAP: I'm losing track of the days.
    December 18th, 2016 at 01:19am
  • Forever Young.

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    @ joelkanitz
    Probably not until next weekend :( I fell behind in writing and wanna get ahead again before I post lol but if I write enough I could probably post two chapters
    December 18th, 2016 at 12:55am
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    @ Forever Young.
    Of course! Very excited for the next chapter. Xo
    December 17th, 2016 at 09:17pm
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    @ vmari97
    Don't worry it'll all be explained, eventually lol thank you for commenting!! Xo
    December 17th, 2016 at 08:58pm
  • Forever Young.

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    @ joelkanitz
    Hahaha YEP JACK DID THAT. So glad you're still enjoying this (and keeping up with it ) haha
    December 17th, 2016 at 08:57pm
  • Dreamuser

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    Lmao the present time is amazing! As for their past...I still don't get what happened exactly...it's like, it seems Alex is at fault for everything, but when I read about their past it always feels as if Jack will be the one to end things? I'm so confused lol Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    December 15th, 2016 at 10:33pm
  • fifthghost

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    THIS CHAPTER. I'M ACTUALLY SHOOK. I was really dithering between thinking Alex might just take off back to Baltimore or to his parents' without telling Jack OR Jack offering up something stupid like that... and he did... He Really Did That. Kinda wanna shake him and tell him he's a damn fool but it's kinda super cute that he's still so attached to Alex after everything. All the unsaid things between them are killinggggg me. Like there's so much they should be saying but just... aren't. I know it's awkward but SPEAK TO EACH OTHER.

    I loved John's little appearance in this chapter but omg Alex is literally the worst friend ever. I probably would've called the police or something to send out a search party for him by now what an idiot but I feel like him physically avoiding all his issues like that pretty much sums up my entire life so I can't speak too badly of him.

    And before I talk for another seven paragraphs, the flashback was super fucking cute. Alex being so happy with himself was adorable.
    December 12th, 2016 at 01:14am
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    @ Forever Young.
    You're welcome! I could honestly ramble for hours when I leave comments, that's me usually trying to dumb it down, hahaha. I'm making a really conscious effort to keep up with this fic because I always fall out of the habit and I don't finish them even when I really enjoy them (ie. The Devil Wears Prada, Perfect Game, Sleeping With Giants, probably more...) and I get really frustrated with myself, SO I REALLY WANNA KEEP UP WITH THIS ONE. I'm planning to go back and read the ones I never finished as well. :')
    December 11th, 2016 at 11:31pm
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    @ vmari97
    Hahahaha thank you so much for commenting :))) xo
    December 11th, 2016 at 11:07pm
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    @ OverbearingStruggles
    Thank you so much for commenting!! Glad you're enjoying it so far! Xo
    December 11th, 2016 at 11:06pm
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    @ joelkanitz
    I seriously love your comments because they're so long and nice :)) I'm going to try and post the next chapter in an hour or so once I finish proofing it lol
    December 11th, 2016 at 11:05pm
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    Thank you so much!! Glad you're liking it :))
    December 11th, 2016 at 11:04pm
  • Dreamuser

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    aksbdHSDhdbHD
    December 4th, 2016 at 03:55pm