The Universe Inside of Us - Comments

dude i just caught up and OKAY LOOK I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER STAT
this angst isn't as heartwrenching as it was for me for like this BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN IT STILL DOESN'T MAKE MY HEART DO FLIPPY FLOPS
bc it does
it fkn does
also, gOOD ONE ISAAC
WHAT TYPE OF DARN RESPONSE IS THAT

This burn is killing me. They need to just talk, but I get it. It's hard.

This is just so relatable. The very fact that Alex isn't okay, that he says he hasn't been feeling good, it cuts deep. And Isaac I just... I feel for him. I feel for them both.

Oh man. I can't wait to see what Isaac is up to.

Oh. My. God.

This is just so heart breakingly good/amazing/beautiful...

I want to have more words but nothing I can say shines any sort of light on how wonderful this story is.

The end of the first bit sounds like he's trying to reassure himself.

I think I just realized that Alex doesn't feel like he's worthy of Isaac, but maybe I'm wrong?

ALEX LOVES ISAAC.

I feel like you're placing my heart in a blender and trying to decide which setting will be best for destroying it. So far, I'm okay with that.

But are Alex and Jeremy having an affair? Because if so I'll find a way to insert myself into the story just to kick someone's ass.

The dialogue is always just so good. I'm literally laughing over the fact that the Christmas tree got knocked over and he's just like "Happy birthday, Jesus."

This is starting to breaking my heart

This is so relatable.

Update soon.

The way you use your descriptions is beautiful. I just wanted to tell you that. You've somehow managed to make a chapter light hearted and heavy at the same time and I can't help but find myself amazed.

The dynamic between the two of them is just so fun to read. Personally they're quite intense but then when they talk to each other it's jokey and I find that great.
Apple pie ice cream actually sounds delicious.

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I'm leaving off at the end of chapter 6 and I plan on reading the rest when I get home but I wanted to leave this comment because I haven't left one in 4 days.

Yasss.
This is just so wonderful and I love it. And usually i can't stand 2nd person narratives but like the lovely Raveena said you do an amazing job with it.

Can't wait for more

oh Fae, my bae, this amazing and I need more. I love the 2nd person narrative so much. You do it so well. If I did it, every sentence would start with "you" and it'd just be a trainwrekc. But you do it so beautifully, and the writing is so simple yet so deep, I love it.

Though a small town boy in San Francisco? I wonder who that could be based off?

I don't know if I can handle this. It's already too good. It's already heartbreaking. I agree 100% with what Alex said. This is gonna fuck me up.

look
like I said before
not the gay I wanted (initially) but I'M SO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO POST THIS ANYWAYS
I CAN FEEL MY HEART READY TO BREAK
BC I KNOW FAE
I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE GOING TO DO
YOU'RE GOING TO fuck ME UP
You are like that ex I shouldn't return to because I don't want to get my heart broken again but I'm going to do it anyways because somewhere there were good feelings too
I am ready.

FAE OMG
_ omg
I need this

OH MY GOD I AM SO READY FOR THIS
SO
FUCKING
READY

"Neil happened when you were eighteen, but his love came in bursts when he knew yours was unwavering." I can't wait, I can already tell how beautiful this is going to be!

my body is ready

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

Basically, YOU ALREADY KNOW HOW PSYCHED I AM FOR THIS
because you're going to do this brilliantly because your writing and agagahhhhhh
plz

I'm so ready/excited for this! The summary/layout are both so amazing. I hope you post a chapter soon!