Innocence - Comments

please please update!!!!!

hehe thanks for the comment!

Atlanta Georgia is the BOMB! XDDDDDDDDDD

....and I just caught that I misspelled Candace... I put Cadence instead.. Oops!! xp

I am in Awe!!
When I first saw this story, I was a little bit iffy about reading it, Not knowing if it was the type of story I would normally read. I had it up on my tab for about three or four days and just thought, 'What the heck, might as well give it a shot.' and WOW!! I was totally and incapably hooked after the first chapter!!!
This story is amazing!! and I honestly can't wait for more of it!!! ^.^

I love it so much!!
There really isn't any constructive criticism that I can think of, This story is just full blown AMAZING!!

I do pity Mike, He just can't let her go! and It is partly Cadence's fault because she never calls him back, only when she feels the upmost guilt about her friend back in Georiga... and what's up with Trevor acting so cold?? Her first day he was the nice one, and Aiden was the moody one!! Now it's all switched up!!! I totally understand why everyone is acting the way they are, It's easy to understand.. and I love Gloria!! She sounds awesome!!

Well.. I think.. No, I KNOW that this is the longest story comment that I have ever written, and I'm done rambling!!

Kudos!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! ....Ooh.. The only thing that I don't like is William, and Mac, and all them... The just annoy me!! But, on the other hand, I LOVE Nadia!! (and yesh.. I am a VERY BAD speller, I can pick it out most of the time when other people do it, but when it comes to myself, I'm a shitty speller...)

XD.. And to answer your question.. I do ramble alot... =)

Dude I just found this story, I'm loving it:) you can see growth in your lead and feel what she is going threw. I can't wait for more. Tj

i finally got to read you updates.
:D
(i had no internet for daaaays. :/)
i wonder is candace gonna ever talk to mike againn?

I don't get it.
Why is there a sequel and the first one isn't finished yet?
I'm going to read the sequel...lol
I'm loving the story!!!

i like it, write more soon.

are candace and aiden gonna make up?
or is he gonna still be all bipolarr?
oh an thaanks fer the early update.
made me smilee.
:]

nice chapter. write more soon.

it took very suuuper longg.!
but i loved it all the samee.
:]
please dont let your next update take as long as this one did to get outt.
:]

i just read this story and i think that she is quite good. i would like to see what will happen next, so i hope you will write more soon. i see that you haven't update for a long time, so should i go read the sequel or are you going to continue this one?

ahh yay!
you updated!
ahww.
candice is leaven mike behind in her head.
:/
but ohweeell.
loooved the update by the way.
=DD

is it still bein rewritten?
or do i go to corruption?
cause i really dont wanna read the first part of corruption unless im suposed to, and ruin this amazingly wonderful fantabulously awsome story of yours.

I really like this story. I remember reading it along time ago, but still I loved it.

oh damn you're taking the chapters off.
well i'll just wait. i'll keep checking until you repost it.

This story is great!!! you rock!!!!
hehe, yeah i'm glad you started putting up the chapter so i know what this story is about and can read it's sequel.....

So I am going to update this story to the best of my ability. The writing skills I have now are so much better than I had awhile ago. Hope you all like this story.

Chaotic Nightmares:

this is like twilight.... -ticked off facial expression-

I think I got that already...so no need to repeat.