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  • AllTimePensFan

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    Love love love the ending of this! I'm so glad she finally told him and she was able to complete the change. Great work! I can't wait to start the sequel
    June 10th, 2017 at 05:32am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    That was amazing Mr. Green
    June 10th, 2017 at 01:34am
  • AJ9

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    What a great ending!

    Off to read the sequel Whistle
    June 9th, 2017 at 08:32pm
  • shortygirl

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    They finally had sexy time! Lol glad she's alive for the sequel.
    June 9th, 2017 at 08:22pm
  • hmc09

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    First part really funny ending was sad.

    Please do a seuqel!!
    June 8th, 2017 at 09:44pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Oh god James :( the poor girl can't catch a break! I LOVE that she's letting Syn get closer to her. I really hope she makes it and finally can tell him what's going on. And YES I'd love a sequel! I love your work. I can't wait for the next chapter, even if it is the end :(
    June 8th, 2017 at 05:28am
  • Hazzie

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    When you say ''no matter how this ends'' I really HOPE she will no die completely! And to answer your question; yes I do want a Sequel! Also, I really hope you write other fictions on A7X 'cause you're bloody (no pun intended) talented! It was so obvious the chapter was going to end with such a big cliff hanger! Nice one, though. They are getting closer! But yeah, overall it was great! I do want a sequel, because I feel like.... those 22 chapters were actually only the beginning of the story. Whatever you decide; I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it. :) xo
    June 8th, 2017 at 03:51am
  • pennycausesdread

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    New chapter was fantastic, so many new factors of their relationship at play!
    June 8th, 2017 at 03:14am
  • bellageller1

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    Omg please update soon James can't die!!!
    June 8th, 2017 at 01:10am
  • guildhallgirl88

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    @ SynysterVengeance13
    Right?!? Ugh, James and her need to process stuff! Glad you like the idea of a sequel!
    June 8th, 2017 at 01:08am
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    @ shortygirl
    Oh my gosh, your comment cracked me up!!! "I knew Matt leaving was fishy". We all blame Matty now.
    June 8th, 2017 at 01:06am
  • shortygirl

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    No she can't die! Not after all this. They've been through so much. I knew Matt leaving was fishy
    June 8th, 2017 at 12:16am
  • AJ9

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    Yesss! Sequel! Dance

    Please update again soon. Xxx
    June 7th, 2017 at 09:45pm
  • ava_bear001

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    yes sequel!
    June 7th, 2017 at 09:23pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    OH MY GOD! Why didn't she tell him! Please please please do a sequel I love this story so much
    June 7th, 2017 at 07:59pm
  • pattycake

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    There should definitely be a sequel! I already can't wait for the next chapter, and I 100% need more James/Brian in my life. :)
    June 7th, 2017 at 07:53pm
  • guildhallgirl88

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    @ AllTimePensFan
    She is feeling the connection! So glad you're enjoying it! :)
    June 7th, 2017 at 06:18pm
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    @ caligirl1605 @ shortygirl @ pattycake @ SynysterVengeance13 @ AJ9

    So glad you're enjoying this story! James and Brian are getting closer. About to get even closer in the new chapter up now! Can't wait to hear what you think! Enjoy!
    June 7th, 2017 at 06:17pm
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    Good guesses! You can find out now, the new chapter is up! Glad you're enjoying it and looking forward to your thoughts on this chapter.
    June 7th, 2017 at 06:15pm
  • caligirl1605

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    Wow great update!! Love how James is coming around without realizing it yet! Can't wait for more!!
    June 4th, 2017 at 03:03pm
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