Thank you so much for the detailed response. It explains a lot and it definitely shows all the thought you've put into this. Can't wait to see what happens!
@ AJ9 Thanks!! I'm hoping to at the first of the week. Things are about to get dramatic in the next two parts. I've given away so many clues to upcoming chapters tonight. Glad you're enjoying it.
@ AJDWriter Actually, this is a great question! Yes and no. It'll be explained later that Brian being around James to watch over her is what caused her to start to very very slowly change. It would have taken years for her to turn, then when Nathan bit her it drastically sped the process up. So while Brian may have felt something when she was with other guys while he was watching her, the feelings would not have been nearly as intense. Just more a slight frustration at what would seem to be nothing in general. And yes, they feed off of each other's energy. Him being closer to her lessens the effects of her changing drastically. Like when he found her in the bathroom, she would have been down and out for hours longer had he not been by her side. Maybe one day he'll need her in the same way ;) Sorry for the novel-long answer. I appreciate the question, I've put a lot of thought into her change, the effects and how it could all best play a part of the story.
Okay, I have a weird question. With James and Brian being mates, they get stronger when they're around each other and kind of feed off of each other's energy, right? So when all those times that Brian was watching her, would he feel when she was hooking up or making out with other guys?
I really hope Brian and James can be together soon. Brian's starting to let his guard down but I think it'll take a bit longer for James. Please update again soon. xxx
I love how Brian is slowly letting his guard down. And I also like how James isn't having any of it. It's going to make them getting together even better!
LOVED the two updates! :) I thought it were strange that I missed a chapter but no ; it was updated ''together''. xD I'm glad that Matt is going to be ok! And I hope Brian is not back to being a real dickhead -_- And the glue part .... Never would've thought about something like that ahah, but it was a great one! Nice to know there's no more Nathan, but I have a feeling it won't stay perfect for long... Nice chapters, can't wait to read more. :)
I kneeeeew it! Damn something needs to happen, and fast! And I hope Matt is going to be ok ... As always, this was an amazing update! Yet, it's still too short for me, ahah. Really love your fiction. :) Update soon! Xo
Brian needs to man up and tell her. I feel for James right now and I look forward to knowing what happened to Matt while he wasn't ther. Great update can't wait for more <3
I knew it! I actually like when Brian and James fight. I mean, I like that they're mates but it's kinda cute how they act when they hate each other. And oh no, Matt! Please let him be okay! He's such an awesome brother!
He needs to tell her! He needs to stop being so dumb. I hope Matt is okay and that Brian will finally stop making James hate him. Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
Ok ; finished it , FREAKING LOVED IT ! I can't even tell you how much I wanna read more and more and more! How Syn is being an ass, though... Hopefully things will work out between them! I can't believe I didn't know about this story at the beginning (me always being on Mibba and all... ) All in all, I love your story. :) And I can't wait to read more! xo