Great story, really loving the progression. I am making the prediction that Brian is going to want to ravage her when he wakes up because he's got a taste, lol. Can't wait for the new chapter!
This was a really exciting chapter. I loved all the fighting and the ending was sweet. I'm guessing syn is gonna wake up horny or something? Haha Please update again right now!
@ AshenRoses88 Of course it is a rocky road for them. What can you do! So basically she's still changing? I really hope she'll get over that bridge before her time runs out. And thank you for telling me ; I'm gonna read it right about now!
@ AJ9 Ahh thanks! I hit some mental road block with writing this story. I've had the ending done for a while, but just reediting it like a thousand times and my brain just checked out for a little while. Update is up now, I'm looking forward to your thoughts, it's a good one.
@ Hazzie Haha, I really debated adding those last two sentences of the next chapter in or not. Then I did. It just didn't seem right, while they may have a sweet moment, life is a swirling mess around them, that's life, nothing is ever perfect for too long for them... Haha, I know you don't hate me. Next chapter is up now. Enjoy, and I can't wait to her your thoughts, this chapter is PACKED with goodies.
.....Can I just say that I hate you? :) First it all goes smooth and you think they're going to get along and it's gonna be a positive chapter and then BAM! You finish the chapter on such a suspense ... but anyway, I still think your story is amazing and it's nice to see that she's finally building a bridge and is slowly getting over it. Now I'm really excited to read what's next! ( Ps: I hope you know I don't really hate you. :P But the torture isn't fair ahah ) xo
First up, I'm glad you updated again cos I've really missed this. Secondly, I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter cos you've left this on a knife edge! Please, please, please update again soon. Xxx
Ohhhh my she's being so stubborn! I mean it's not the time to be a bitch; she's basically dying there! She needs to suck it up and deal with it! I can't wait to see what will happen for the upcoming events! Nice update, as always! :) Excited for what's next! xo
Oooohhh I love where this is going! Happy that the story finally came out; now she kinda knows why he was such a dick to her all this time. But I mean... she wants to be friends and nothing else (for now?) but... her time is running out, right? Anyways, I love the update, always do. This story is really amazing! I can't wait to read more! :) xo
Great update :) I have to agree with Jimmy thrill either kill each other first or fuck. I can't wait for more and thanks for letting me know you'd updated <3