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  • shortygirl

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    I'm so happy she helped Brian and kicked some major vampire butt.
    June 4th, 2017 at 03:31am
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    Just read the entire story, and I CANNOT wait for the next update :)
    June 3rd, 2017 at 03:02pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Loved the latest chapter! I'm glad James is starting to sense the connection in more ways than one. I'm loving this story, keep it up!
    June 3rd, 2017 at 04:39am
  • pennycausesdread

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    Great story, really loving the progression. I am making the prediction that Brian is going to want to ravage her when he wakes up because he's got a taste, lol. Can't wait for the new chapter!
    June 3rd, 2017 at 02:25am
  • AJ9

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    Another stunning chapter from an awesome story! Please update again soon. Xxx
    June 3rd, 2017 at 01:04am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Awesome as always I look forward to more :)
    June 3rd, 2017 at 12:59am
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    This was a really exciting chapter. I loved all the fighting and the ending was sweet. I'm guessing syn is gonna wake up horny or something? Haha
    Please update again right now!
    June 3rd, 2017 at 12:17am
  • Hazzie

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    Of course it is a rocky road for them. What can you do! So basically she's still changing? I really hope she'll get over that bridge before her time runs out. And thank you for telling me ; I'm gonna read it right about now!
    June 2nd, 2017 at 08:51pm
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    @ AJ9
    Ahh thanks! I hit some mental road block with writing this story. I've had the ending done for a while, but just reediting it like a thousand times and my brain just checked out for a little while. Update is up now, I'm looking forward to your thoughts, it's a good one.
    June 2nd, 2017 at 08:25pm
  • guildhallgirl88

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    @ Hazzie
    Haha, I really debated adding those last two sentences of the next chapter in or not. Then I did. It just didn't seem right, while they may have a sweet moment, life is a swirling mess around them, that's life, nothing is ever perfect for too long for them... Haha, I know you don't hate me. Next chapter is up now. Enjoy, and I can't wait to her your thoughts, this chapter is PACKED with goodies.
    June 2nd, 2017 at 08:23pm
  • Hazzie

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    .....Can I just say that I hate you? :) First it all goes smooth and you think they're going to get along and it's gonna be a positive chapter and then BAM! You finish the chapter on such a suspense ... but anyway, I still think your story is amazing and it's nice to see that she's finally building a bridge and is slowly getting over it. Now I'm really excited to read what's next! ( Ps: I hope you know I don't really hate you. :P But the torture isn't fair ahah ) xo
    June 2nd, 2017 at 07:54pm
  • AJ9

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    First up, I'm glad you updated again cos I've really missed this. Secondly, I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter cos you've left this on a knife edge! Please, please, please update again soon. Xxx
    May 31st, 2017 at 11:17pm
  • Hazzie

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    Ohhhh my she's being so stubborn! I mean it's not the time to be a bitch; she's basically dying there! She needs to suck it up and deal with it! I can't wait to see what will happen for the upcoming events! Nice update, as always! :) Excited for what's next! xo
    May 24th, 2017 at 05:37am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Now she's being a bitch. Like Matt said, she needs to build a bridge and get over it. Keep it up! I love this story :)
    May 24th, 2017 at 03:18am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Awesome update :) I'm hoping that she will understand that Matt is trying to keep them all safe :)
    May 23rd, 2017 at 09:02pm
  • shortygirl

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    There making progress. Hopefully she'll except him as her mate.
    May 18th, 2017 at 07:09am
  • Hazzie

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    Oooohhh I love where this is going! Happy that the story finally came out; now she kinda knows why he was such a dick to her all this time. But I mean... she wants to be friends and nothing else (for now?) but... her time is running out, right? Anyways, I love the update, always do.
    This story is really amazing! I can't wait to read more! :) xo
    May 18th, 2017 at 03:48am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I wanna hug him right now, poor Brian <3
    May 18th, 2017 at 12:52am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Great update :) I have to agree with Jimmy thrill either kill each other first or fuck. I can't wait for more and thanks for letting me know you'd updated <3
    May 12th, 2017 at 03:37pm
  • shortygirl

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    Lol fucking on the coffee table. They probably would though.
    May 12th, 2017 at 01:09am