My Heart Belongs to You - Comments

@ Shatterheart
Thank you :)

Hi! I was brought to this story through a story rec.

To start, let me just say I absolutely adore this layout! Both the banner and layout color is simple and clean and complements your story instead of distracting from it.

Onto the first chapter!
This totally reminded me of that Taylor Swift music video; in a good way! this chapter drops the readers right into a scene of high school you see in movies, with the cliques and catty cheerleader.

I think this is a good first chapter; nice introduction to your characters and a perfect length to hook the readers.
I'll admit, this genre isn't my usual cup of tea, but I enjoyed what I've read so far!

So far, so good! Good job! Stay awesome!

@ TheDevilsHalo;
Aha i know, i was just teasing a bit. ::arms;

You're welcome!

@ Hina;
This was for nano so that kept me motivated and Erin as well... she was a huge help with this!!!

Thank you

I'm gonna ask it, where do you find the time to update all of this? I mean almost 20 chapters? Holy cow, Mandy! But that's not intimidating. It just means there's more of the story to read.

Anywho, I'm about five chapters in and I have to say I'm enjoying what I'm reading so far and you've definitely hit the clicheness right on the dot. Everything is so cliche about this story but it's enjoyable and I'm really hating Michelle right now (such a Reginap-esque character!). Thanks for writing such an amazing story! Keep up the good work!

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you :)

Chapter 18

This chapter was so sweet!

@ Twisted;;Symphony
I thought I'd made it obvious that they liked each other, but maybe it was just obvious to me because I kinda based the pairing off of one of my friends relationships (she got with her other half at 15). I'm really glad that you still loved it and thank you for being honest

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you :) kinda gathered that everyone is using Facebook these days, so as teenagers they definitely have it!!

Chapter 17

I agree with Twitsted. I liked the way they ended up together. Adding facebook and social media is so realistic and spot on in this story.
I'm also proud of how far Dylan has come to defend Taylor.
Mr. Corrick is an awesome guy!

I'm not really feeling connected to the way they go to together... there was no tension, really, nothing that screamed that they were more than just friends or had feelings for each other... and they never really talked about how they feel... idk. Still loved it, please update again soon!

I'm not really feeling connected to the way they go to together... there was no tension, really, nothing that screamed that they were more than just friends or had feelings for each other... and they never really talked about how they feel... idk. Still loved it, please update again soon!

I'm not really feeling connected to the way they go to together... there was no tension, really, nothing that screamed that they were more than just friends or had feelings for each other... and they never really talked about how they feel... idk. Still loved it, please update again soon!

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you

Chapter 16

YAAAY! THEY ARE FINALLY TOGETHER!
This chapter was perfect! Filled with action, drama, and a sweet end. I loved it!

@ Ghoul Scouts
She sure is

Thank you

Chapter 15

Banner looks good!
O0o0, I wonder what Tammy is going to do to Kevin. and I'm really curious to see how Kevin takes the news. Hopefully they will still have a close friendship.
I'm really glad Dylan's friends stuck up for Taylor from Michelle. I wish Michelle would just give it up already. She is horny for drama. Haha.

Great update!

@ Twisted;;Symphony
You can

so.... can I have Kevin?

@ Twisted;;Symphony
You didn't really think that life with a bunch of teenagers would be straight forward did you!

@ Ghoul Scouts
There's more to come :) Taylor's got some inner soul searching to do!

Chapgter 14
That was really sweet how Tammy and her mom keep the fathers memory.
But more importantly...OoOoOoO! Totally caught me off guard with Kevin suddenly coming out with a confession like that. I'm beyond excited to see what happens next.

Wonderful, juicy update.