My Heart Belongs to You - Comments

Love the clicheness of this all (: -totally not meant as anything less than a compliment, these stories are my favorite (: update again soon! I'm excited to see how this plays out (:

@ melodrama.
Thank you :)

This looks like it going to be a really great read. I love the comic relief that Tammy brings to the story, she'll definitely become a favorite character of mine. As much as the loner/quarterback story is "cliche," it doesn't even matter if it is written well, which this is. There is so much more depth to this story in just two chapters than the typical story of this type. Plus, you're going into way more background with Taylor, which is great. I can't wait to see more about her home life/relationship with her mother. Can't wait for more!

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you, I'm trying to give Taylor a voice (kinda like although she's being bullied she doesn't play the victim, she'll stand up for herself) at least at the moment she will!

Chapter Two

Loved the update. It was so realistic from a teenage girls standpoint. I really enjoy that about this story. I honestly hate Dylan's girlfriend with a passion. And I'm on the fence between like and dislike for Dylan. I hate how he treats Taylor when other people are around. But it is so spot on with how high school politics are. Wonderful job Mandy!

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you for your support

Lovely start to the story Mandy! I love the setting of the story and the relationship you built between the characters. I love the silliness and care free relationship between Taylor and her best friend Tammy. I love how there was a mysterious vibe with the popular kids. Overall great job. This is going ot be a great story.