My Heart Belongs to You - Comments

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thanks :) The whole teacher thing came from my own personal experience in school, so I'm glad it went over well :)

Chapter Seven

I really liked how Dylan finally stepped in between his girlfriend and Taylor. His girlfriend is beyond a b*tch. I hate her so much.
I really liked how Taylor had a male figure in her life to talk to. Good job putting in the teacher role model. Reminded me of my favorite teacher in high school.

Wonderful update! I can't wait to read more.

@ Twisted;;Symphony
Thank you :) I'm excited!

YAY! He actually acknowledged her in front of everyone and stood up for her! Loved the update (:

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you :) There's a few explosions on the way

Chapter Six

Nice dialogue. Everything was perfect the way you set it up. I'm very interested that Taylor is getting more snarky with Dylan about his girlfriend. I feel like pretty soon Dylan is going to get fed up with it and exploded on her. Or break up with his girlfriend and ignore Taylor. Those are my two possible predictions.
I'm so glad Taylor and her mom made up. It was such a sweet end to the chapter.

Great work Mandy!

@ TheDevilsHalo;
Yes, I completely agree with you there! I like how you're writing it so far so please keep this going :)

@ TheDevilsHalo;
Yes, I completely agree with you there! I like how you're writing it so far so please keep this going :)

@ Nereid
Thank you :)

I don't want the whole story to be full on drama and I think it's important to take a step back from it every now and again. The same with the story all being based in school, although Taylor will spend a majority of her time in school, there's plenty that can be written about outside the classroom as well :)

I'm really glad that you're enjoying this!

Cute updates as per usual! Wouldn't expect anything less from you after all.

I loved the line "...you're not my dirty little secret, Tay...you are my salvation.", it was so sweet and shows the amount of depth that Dylan has as a character.

Chapter six was great pause between all the drama of Taylor's school life, and it was nice to see her healing the divide between her mum and her, as well as keeping her friendship as drama free as possible with Dylan.

I eagerly wait the next update!

Chapter Five
I lvoed Tammy's randomness. I loved the really weird/silly story ideas she came up with and Taylor immediately shut it down. That part made me laugh so hard.
BUT YES, THE DRAMA HAS BEGUN! I'm so hype. I loved how you wrote out the texts between Dylan and Taylor. Taylor's snarky text back was so beyond perfect.

Great update! I can't wait for more.

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you :)

Chapter four

You have been doing a really good job following your ideas up in the following chapters. I liked the fight between Taylor and her mom. Taylor's reaction afterwards was so realistic. I always felt like Taylor did after I had a fight with my parents. Dylan seemed like he saved the day comforting Taylor. I have a feeling it was his b*tchy girlfriend calling him. I am so excited to see the follow up on what she will do when she finds out Dylan was with Taylor.

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Good update :)

@ Nereid
Thank you :)

This is a cute story so far. Never really been a reader of high school romance stories, but there's always a time to start :)

So far, I'm liking the realism. It feels like high school all over again. The drama, the bullying, the cliques, it's how it used to be. But the realism of emotions is also there too. Taylor's feelings towards her father’s death, her mother’s absence, and her friendships with Dylan and Tammy, it's all so well written. Kudos for that!

Like I said earlier, I don’t really read high school romance stories, but I think this story is one I will be sticking with. I want to see how you develop your characters and your plot. You have a lot of potential to create something wonderful and I want to see it.

@ Ghoul Scouts
Thank you :)

Chapter three

I love the dialogue you had in the beginning of the story. It was so realistic and spot on. I liked how even though she didn't show it, Taylor was actually upset/bothered by what Michelle threatened to her. I wonder how quickly she will find out Taylor didn't listen to her warning/threat. I liked ow you had a follow up in this chapter about the mother not being around and breaking her promise. I'm interested to see how that will pan out in the rest of the story. Great update!

P.S: Tammy is my favorite character. I love how witty and clever she is. She is also an amazing friend.

@ Twisted;;Symphony

Thank you :)