Elements of a Selfish Desire - Comments

@ Rockheart_Jade
I fucking love this trip! Again, I didn't get notifications that this has new chapters... Imma have to have words with mibba *grumpy face*

@ SynysterVengeance13
What kind of writer would I be without keeping you guessing? Hehehehe.

As far as what is wrong with Brian, remember what I have said in the past. Remember that nothing is as it seems. Stick with me. It depends on how this next chapter goes. I may drop the bomb at the end of next chapter (you'll hate me if I leave his confession the last sentence, lol), or the next one, but the time is at hand.

Sorry it took me so long, trying to finish uni for Christmas. How could you leave it there! What’s wrong with Brian! Loved the update can’t wait for more :D

Loved the update, so glad Zacks going to learn everything he shyed away from. I didn’t expect jimmy to have brought this upon Zack and as for Brian I still have no idea. Can’t wait for more

My guess would be that Jimmy is either Zacky’s therapist or Omega... Possibly both!

I totally suspected Jimmy wasn’t dead! I can’t wait to find out WHO and WHERE he is existing though... It sounds like Jimmy was the one to turn Azeri...? I NEED to know what’s killing Brian :’( Zacky needs to save him!

@ SynysterVengeance13
That actually makes me happy. I like to keep you guessing. Means you're paying attention, and aren't bored. lol

@ Rockheart_Jade

I genuinely have no idea, but then there's so much going on in my head I have no idea what day is what at the moment

@ SynysterVengeance13
Thank you for not murdering me in word form, lol. I was worried that people would be up in arms over that.....The next chapter is written. In fact, I just finished it. But even my mind is reeling from all this, and I need to let it sit for a few days so I can go back over it. I have to make sure it sounds right because Vengeance sounds like he's talking in circles right now. It's in character, for sure. But I don't want it to be more overwhelming than it has to be.

Amuse me, please. Take a stab at who Jimmy is in this story.

Loved the update, it's nice to see Zee and Vee having a civil conversation together. I so look forward to how Jimmy plays in this story and what will happen with Brian. I can't wait for more :D

@ SynysterVengeance13
I am working on it. It is getting dicey. There is one scene that will be coming up that I can already tell you I am concerned about writing. I want to do it right, I want to do it justice, and... I don't know. I almost panicked telling you that! LOL. It's BIG. Having said that, we are several chapters away from it.

@ MissMisery
I can't give it away. But I will say keep what you said in mind and hang onto it, no matter what. If you don't, you may be about to get crushed. I will stress yet again, "nothing is what it seems".

Loved the update :D ugh now I'm really curious as to what is going on, especially since Vengeance stepped out and told Zack to leave Brian alone, Please update again soon :)

Loved the update :D ugh now I'm really curious as to what is going on, especially since Vengeance stepped out and told Zack to leave Brian alone, Please update again soon :)

@ Rockheart_Jade Hey girl! I must have missed the update for the second to last chapter? *shrugs* I haven’t abandoned you, promise! But I did comment as soon as I found it! I’m hoping Bri has some mad powers coming his way! It would be wicked if he and Zee could bond over being supernatural badasses *grins*

@ MissMisery
All I will say is that you probably should be worried. *Innocent smile* What? What did I say? Lol....but keep in mind, in the supernatural, the rules are different. Nothing is as it seems.

Yeeeeeaaaaaah, now I’m worried about Brian... Something is most definitely up! The second time Vengeance repeated BACK OFF, I realised he was talking to Zacky... Now I don’t know if he was protecting Brian, or if he was protecting Zacky...?

Ohhhhh shizzle sticks! What’s wrong with Brian? Hopefully a Zacky can figure it out and help the poor dude...

@ SynysterVengeance13
It's funny you should say that. I am on a roll today. After I updated Second Chance, I finished off this chapter for this story and posted it, and then I kinda wrote the next chapter. I don't know that I am 100% happy with it, but I would say for the most part it is finished. You may have to wait a few days to see it as I want to make sure the bulk of the readers that are following the story get to see this chapter before I update again. Hate it when people miss chapters because I know when I do it is upsetting lol.

Loved the update! What’s wrong with Brian? why is he ill? Does he know something? What does Omega have to do with this all? Ugh so many questions and I’m like so impatient haha can’t waot for the next update!