Elements of a Selfish Desire - Comments

Ahiiiiit... What’s happen with Brian?!

@ SynysterVengeance13
Glad you feel that way. I want it to be mysterious as we go along and learn more about his abilities, issues, etc. But pretty soon you'll be faced with seeing his decision. Once that comes out, all bets are off.

@ Rockheart_Jade

If it's any thing like this I know I'll enjoy it if you do write it, I like that it's still very secret as to what it's fully about at the moment.

@ SynysterVengeance13
All I'm going to say is fasten your seat belt. It's going to get crazy. Right now we are more normal day to day life with some supernatural elements thrown in. We're going to be almost full on supernatural soon. And I wasn't planning on saying this, but I already have the sequel playing out in my head. That one will likely be mostly all supernatural from the very beginning.

super curious as to what's up with Brian, I can't wait for more, loved this update :)

@ Rockheart_Jade girl, you’re my kind of crazy! I’m completely fascinated with this story. Its trippy as fuck. I love it. It’s a great escape from everyday shit

@ MissMisery
So, I'm going to be totally honest with you. I typically only know a handful of things that are going to happen in my stories. What I mean by that is my mind runs on auto pilot when I write and some things just "happen on their own". This is one of those things. Omega was not in my original plan, but appears to have a larger role than I originally thought. LOL. I realize this makes me sound crazy. But there you go. An insider's look behind the scenes.

Oooooh, Omega!

Loved the update and I’m even more intrigued as to what’s going to happen next

@ SynysterVengeance13
Thanks. This next chapter is done, but it is so out there I feel the need to really go over it before I post it. All I can say is you're about to travel into another dimension ;)

I love this. Loved the update can’t wait to see what happens next :D

Ohhhhh Zacky... What decision do you need to make? What kind of hybrid are you? What are non-hybrids like?

@ SynysterVengeance13
It's a tough one. It's twisted. At first you may want to run from the story, but stick with it. Endings and beginnings are not what they seem in this crazy tale.

Loved the update! I really can’t wait to find out what’s going on with him and the decision he needs to male :)

@ Sitkowski.
Thank you so much!l It is a challenge and a total departure from what I typically write. But I am having a blast!

I really love this!

SynysterVengeance13:

Loving this so far! Can’t wait for more

You don't know the half of it. ;) Even I can't believe what he's dealing with. I never even saw it coming lol.

Glad you're enjoying the insanity so far. Working on chapter 3 as we speak. It is flowing faster than I thought, but I'm also just finishing two days off. We will see how much time I can spend on it during the work week.

Loving this so far! Can’t wait for more

Ooh I like it so far. This is very intriguing and it must be a very tough situation for Zack

@ MissMisery
I am so glad you like it. The next chapter is almost fully written. I want people to have more than that to see what he is dealing with in respect to his other side. That way they can either go "I like it," or "I don't." I don't want them to scratch their heads and walk away. I thought I was losing it writing that first chapter lol.