Burn Us Down - Comments

Yes, yes, yes, yes! Cannot wait until the next update!

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ooooooo !!!!! They are so cute together, even if it's hella awkward right now. I really hope they work it out and that they TALK. They need to talk about what happened and they need to talk about what they want for the future. And they definitely need to talk about the fact that Olivia isn't going to marry him in 6 months. LOVED IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE

Ugh Melissa. Please update soon!

And the flood gates open! Hopefully this is a turning point for them. He knows that Olivia needs more emotion from him, and now she knows that he is actually feeling something other than calmness about the whole thing. Loved the update! Can’t wait for the next one

There we go ahahaha some emotion from the asshat! I'm getting more and more excited (: can't wait for the next update!

Ugh, I don't know why but he is just falling so flat to me. Maybe cuz he isn't begging and thats what I want him to do? He is seeming so nonchalant and I really wanna be petty and have Olivia go on a date with someone else. Please update soon!

Oooo I want him to sweat. Good Leo for treating it like a serious matter. Can’t wait for the next update

Re-read it, and it doesn’t really seem to me that Gerald is all that sorry. I mean, he’s about to lose the girl he was gonna get married too, the girl he built a life with for four years and he seems just.... calm about it all. Idk. Can’t wait to read more!

I’m so glad I checked to see if you were still writing. With the Mibba issues, I’ve been going crazy without anything to read.

I love this so far! I can’t wait to read more of it. Please update soon!