Beyond Paradise - Comments

This is a really original theme for a sort of fanfic like this. I only read the first chapter, but I already really enjoyed it. I like the way it's so in tune with how Billie Joe feels and how he thinks.

Good job! :)

This is definitely one of the best Fanfics I've read! Well done

I love it really original love the character and diction used.

You're a wonderful writer. The details you include are wonderful, and I thoroughly enjoy your writing style.

I'm normally not one to read Green Day fanfics, even though the band themselves are fabulous, so this was new to me. I'm glad the first GD Fic I read was this one though. The characterizations you used were very nice. You made it realistic, unlike a lot of fanfics I've read we're the guys are insanely sappy and cry ever other chapter. So I applaud you(:

There were a few chapters that were, for lack of a better term, slightly over flowing with dialogue. And there isn't anything wrong with using a lot of dialogue, but remember the saying actions speak louder than words. That applies to writing too. I may be the only one who feels this way, because I often find myself not using enough dialogue, but oh well.(:

This story was wonderful to read and had a great plot. Good job!

I really like this story. I'm not much for Green Day anything, but this is written wonderfully.
The only thing that confused me was, is that this story is placed under "true story" when I found it, when it should be a fan-fiction. You might wanna see if you can change that.
Other than that, this is a great piece of work. Good job! :)

I have to say I don't usually read fan-fiction but the site suggested yours so I thought I might try it. Also I'd like to compliment you on your intricate descriptions and detail in your writing. I think just based on the fact that you know how to make words flow well together I'll keep coming back to read the rest. You brought Billie Joe Armstrong to life and not just as some lovesick fangirl. I liked how you were able to portray him as a troubled father and husband. Keep up the good work. :]

I have to say I don't usually read fan-fiction but the site suggested yours so I thought I might try it. Also I'd like to compliment you on your intricate descriptions and detail in your writing. I think just based on the fact that you know how to make words flow well together I'll keep coming back to read the rest. You brought Billie Joe Armstrong to life and not just as some lovesick fangirl. I liked how you were able to portray him as a troubled father and husband. Keep up the good work. :]

Wow you are an amazing writer. clear and beautiful. The only thing I don't like is that when I saw True Story I thought it'd be something personal to you, your story and all that jazz. But you truly made Billie Joe Armstrong your own. Good work and best of luck with your writing in the future.

Wow you are an amazing writer. clear and beautiful. The only thing I don't like is that when I saw True Story I thought it'd be something personal to you, your story and all that jazz. But you truly made Billie Joe Armstrong your own. Good work and best of luck with your writing in the future.

Aw, freakin' great ending, hon! Loved it! Welcome back!

"And the award for the best fucking writer of the last century goes to........"

YOU!!!!

I don't know how you do it...you must be a gift from God or something! I had goosebumps all the way through the chapter. And I got so choked up at the end that I had to go make a sugary drink to maintain my senses.

You've done an awesome, AWESOME job with this story. Fantasy definitley becomes you Madame.

Much love for the story! And for you!

I loved this story! :D It was great, full of emotions and good action : ) I wish I could write like you do ^^

you are officially my IDOL.

you are GOLDEN lady GOLDEN! i hope one day I can write like you...its amazing.

The end was amazing! I just can't believe it's over! It was an awesome story and- I just don't know what to say! I loved the end. I just loved it.

Oh, baby! AWESOME!! More, more!!

God, Stroud is a bastard!

But noooo Billie!!!! I literally had white knuckles reading this, the tension is too much!

Awesome as always, friend.

Much love.

wow. o.o If I could I'd never stop reading this. It was so awesome and this cliffhanger is just mean :p You're an awesome writer!!!!! :D

Holy sh*t! Way to writ a cliffhanger!!

Wow! It's been a long time : ) A human voice? Can't wait for the next chapter : )

I love it. And you could imagine my surprise when the last couple sentences declared that it was a human voice, a woman's soprano voice. I cannot wait for your next update. :)