Beyond Paradise - Comments

Yeah! Let's find out what it is to bring BJ back! xD

Loved it, and YAY, Let's find out what it is that will bring Billie back home.

The last piece of dialogue made me wonder. Really how much was Billie going to give to get back home?

Since the latest chapter SHOULD be one from this story, I will post my comment here: it's BRILLIANT and I love it!

awghz, I love it when the angry pessimist starts crying....!
makes him seem more human than he is....

Damn. O.O That memory was sad :x Poor Billie. I hope he gets out of that he gets out of that place. Odette reminds me of that woman from Matrix that predicted stuff xD

Awww!!!!!!! Poor poor Billie, he just can't let go of his dad... Well I hope Odette could help him, she seems like a really nice lady, I like her. And I love Jabril too, I bet Billie would've gotten out of his mind (more than he already has) if they weren't there. Please please update soon :)

Aw man, that was AMAZING!! I'm so excited about this story.

I loved the chapter. I felt Billie's happiness in the moment he had remembered his father and I felt the sadness when he had to let it go and come back to where he was. It was touching.

You mean, he can't see how much his home, his family, mean to him? Pshaw.

Aha.. Billie's not someone to be patient for a long time ^. - Damn. I wonder what he's gonna do know xD
Heh. He won't find an easy way home, I guess.
Awesome update xD

I guess I know what happened... Was it supposed to be the part of the one shot that you decided to turn into a story? Then it would make sense...

Wait..... does time go on in the other world or has it stopped?
Adrienne's going to think he ran off with someone else :shock:

I loved the update. No wonder Billie just exploded! Who can put up with all this shit anyway?! And I really like Jabril btw, and his friends they seem really cool (I have a thing for bad boys...shhhhh :P). Anyways, update soon! I LOVE this story! :)

I love the way you write and I love the whole story idea. Update soon!

Yeah, Billie's screwed. He's not coming home anytime soon ]:->
I looooooooved the update. Funny how he thought he was back xD Blond moment!

They're confusing him on purpose! Or just don't know the answers either. xD I guess it's not about how to get out...
I looooooooooove this story o.o I'm addicted xD

I hope that Billie finds his way back home.

Poor Billie!!!! Get him out of that aweful place! AAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! Why won't anyone give him straight answers?! Thery're all just confusing him! Please update soon!

The last part brought tears to my eyes. So sad.