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  • billiejoe08

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    great update^ ^
    July 1st, 2008 at 04:18pm
  • billiejoe08

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    great update^ ^
    July 1st, 2008 at 04:18pm
  • Flo.

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    I don't like that man. He's evil >.>
    Billie's got a real problem. No wonder he doesn't want to stay there alone especially at night (I fear even staying home alone now o.o no idea why..never mind)
    I wonder what happens next. What if Billie lost his talent to play guitar? o.o he's so screwed o.o
    That place must be really scary..
    Great update :) I can picture it in my mind! It's so good written ^^
    June 30th, 2008 at 07:59pm
  • Cryptic Bunny

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    This is getting better and better! OMG I'm so excited, please tell me he'll play :( Is this place like where all musicians who don't appreciate their gift go? 'Cause obviously Jabril has been through all this before, he was just like Billie, who lost his talent. I mean there's a lesson behind all this, anyway please please update soon! I can't wait! :)
    June 30th, 2008 at 04:13pm
  • Cryptic Bunny

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    OMG! This story is so incredibly AWESOME!!!!! It's so weird (in a good way) :) and so original! Please update soon!
    June 29th, 2008 at 02:51pm
  • shakethesky

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    AHHHH! He wants to take the music from Billie! AHHHH!
    No
    June 21st, 2008 at 07:52pm
  • billiejoe08

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    this wa agreat update more plz
    June 20th, 2008 at 05:32pm
  • Flo.

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    I'm not guessing where he is for now : p I don't like that man O.O he's reminds me of... agent Smith from Matrix : D
    June 20th, 2008 at 12:42pm
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    nice....sounds like alice in wonderland...okay this is the last time i am going to guess i think he is in his own mind okay, AND that he is in a coma....you know....yeah....

    :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :<---- ten smilies....sweet
    June 20th, 2008 at 05:59am
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    ha ha i agree with la-idiot.

    wonderful

    :D :D :D :D :D :D <----six smilies nice.
    June 18th, 2008 at 09:20pm
  • Flo.

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    wow.
    Billie's on some kind of drugs and he doesn't even know that ^^
    June 18th, 2008 at 08:39pm
  • shakethesky

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    Okay, wait... this confuses me... why doesn't he know his own songs? Did he land in the future or something? :shock:
    June 18th, 2008 at 07:24pm
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    nice....I like it.....more soon please. Well duh....I wonder why people always asks 'more soon' because we know that people are going to write more (well sometimes)....I just don't get it....I guess its habit.

    Just like why do people start conversations with 'what's up' or 'how are you' I mean....its getting old....I need something new....don't you agree. anyways, I got off topic.

    I like the story. Your descriptions were magnificent!!!

    :D :D :D :D :D <---I give you five smilies! Dance
    June 18th, 2008 at 06:32pm
  • Flo.

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    Oh! It's either Billie stuck in alternate reality, his head or .. kinda past. xD FHTB! XD
    Great story ^^
    June 18th, 2008 at 05:25pm
  • Miserable At Best

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    This is really good! I want to read more!
    June 18th, 2008 at 05:17pm
  • shakethesky

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    awh, poor Adrienne :/
    More please!

    Clap
    June 17th, 2008 at 06:01pm
  • Mrs. Whirly

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    can't wait for more. could billie possibly be stuck so deep in his mind that he can't get out? or could he just be wondering around? never know.

    _-_-_SuBsCrIbEs_-_-_
    June 17th, 2008 at 04:17pm
  • Flo.

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    NEW STORY?! O.O
    Awesome xD

    Oh... Billie's not getting home anytimes soon, huh? xD Billie's stuck in some alien town or... alternate universe? xD Can't wait for next update ^^
    You rock!
    June 16th, 2008 at 08:06pm
  • billiejoe08

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    this story is great more plz :D
    June 16th, 2008 at 07:58pm
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