Now, you know that I wouldn't be commenting with a sprained wrist and a wrist brace if it were crap. So, you know it's not. :mrgreen: Anyways, I'm liking it a lot so far. I'm wondering what the lay off will do in the plot of the story. Also, I really adore how Frank is sick of his job.
Whoa. After only two chapters, I'm already addicted to this. I love how sarcastic Frank is; it really brings back the whole reality of the situation, that a lot of sex workers really, really fucking hate their jobs. The first chapter was quite humerous, with how bored he sounded while just doing his job. I hope we get to see more of Frank's boss in the future; he really does sound like a money-hungry idiot, but he's still an interesting character, at least I think so. So yes, I'm quite liking this so far, and I find it very entertaining, in the best way possible. You should definitely continue it. :)
Frank's character is very ... odd. It's almost like he's angry all the time, but not enough to do anything about it. Maybe that'll change though. And he may hate his job, but he must get paid really good. Kudos to the plot. It's very entertaining. :XD I can't wait to the next update.
Like what's been said before me, I think there was a tad too much dialogue, but it seems like it was needed to further introduce us to Frank's character and his situation.
Once again, I love how you portrayed Frank, how he wanted to be fired but he wasn't. I have a question for you, though. Why doesn't Frank just quit, or better yet, look for another job while he still has this one BEFORE he quits? What makes him keep this job?
Anyway, I was super excited you updated only the day after you posted the first chapter. :]]] You have a great writing style, much better than some other stories that I've read. ;]
but still it had no right to attack sexy frankie.
more soon?