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  • GiveMeTherapy

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    that wasn't crap it was good. :]
    June 29th, 2008 at 12:19am
  • NorCal Noise.

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    *page comment virginity stolen by Morgan!!!*

    Muahaha
    June 28th, 2008 at 11:55pm
  • NorCal Noise.

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    That last line of dialogue that the person said had me laughing so hard.
    'Anyone get some lately?'

    That's so brilliant.
    My god, you're amazing.
    Lust. Oh yeah. XD

    I love this soooo much =]

    XOXO
    June 28th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • nope.

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    I love how Frank wanted to get fired. lol
    June 28th, 2008 at 11:13pm
  • opium december.

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    ahaha, I nearly cracked up when Frank said he didn't mind getting fired. Trust him to be honest about it.

    A little too much dialog in one chapter alone, but it wasn't off putting at the least, I realized you needed to set the whole foundations for the story, so its cool to have a chapter that gives us an insight into the possible problems Frank may face from his job.

    More soon :D
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:54pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    haha!

    That's funny!

    Well I can see that some of those people wouldn't pay up....

    Update SPoon!
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:25pm
  • Tainted Seance

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    This is defiantly worthwhile.
    The idea is so original and I'd like to see where it goes.
    Excellent start and your writing style is amazing.
    June 27th, 2008 at 05:18pm
  • faking_innocence

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    nice :)
    more soon
    June 27th, 2008 at 10:37am
  • nope.

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    This sounds like it's going to be fun. =]
    June 27th, 2008 at 06:58am
  • Tie_Me_Up

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    Hah. Phone sex has never been so unappealing.

    Do continue.
    June 27th, 2008 at 04:33am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    this pretty much made my entire day so much better, i needed the laugh!! i love it!

    i can't wait for more!!
    June 27th, 2008 at 04:05am
  • Underground Hero

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    I adore this.
    The scarcasm is heaven =]
    I love when he adds "baby".
    Hillarious.
    PURE Entertainment.
    Update soon please!
    June 27th, 2008 at 03:13am
  • GiveMeTherapy

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    fuckign amazing. can't wait for more
    June 27th, 2008 at 02:59am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Wow....

    That was the sex.

    Literally!

    hehe,

    Update Spoon!
    June 27th, 2008 at 02:47am
  • CyanidexSunshine.

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    Hahaha!
    I love this! It's such a good idea, I haven't seen this type of Frerard before,
    Pleeeassee continue?
    =)
    June 26th, 2008 at 08:28pm
  • opium december.

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    What Cherry Road said. Best idea I've seen Winkiss

    Now when does this next chapter come? ;;P
    June 26th, 2008 at 08:01pm
  • The Horror.

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    I absolutly effin love it! Of coarse continue! Please? *subscribes*
    June 26th, 2008 at 01:41pm
  • Smashed Pumpkin.

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    dude, this is going to be one hell of a story! i wish i thought of that idea!!!! bloody amazing man amazing. Cant wait for more!
    June 26th, 2008 at 10:51am
  • Cherry Road

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    Wow, I've gotta say...pretty ingenious here.

    I really love the idea of Frank being a phone-fucker instead of a prostitute for once. And the fact that he hates the job? Fantastic.

    The details you threw in were great, especially for a kinky little bastard like myself. xD You had a great dynamic of thoughts against actions against dialogue, if that made any sense.

    I also didn't catch any grammar or spelling mistakes, and I'm always looking for those. :cute:

    More soon, if you could? Smiley
    June 26th, 2008 at 06:03am
  • Mitsukai

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    Woot, he hates his job, yet he does it anyway... PHONE SECKS! Funneh!
    June 26th, 2008 at 05:32am
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