August 11th, 2009 at 01:03am
Skinny Jeans Have No Place On These Thighs - Comments
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omg the second update was absolutely DIVINE! I LOOVED it, i love how her throwing up didn't work, because in reailty it never does first time! I absolutely adore how realistic this story is! How Marcus isn't the perfect prince charming with the perfect answers and her mum actually takes away her phone and there's a consquence to her actions. I ADORE this story.August 11th, 2009 at 12:47am
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I loved the update!!
Poor Ella...first she almost gets kidnapped and half taken advantage of, and then her mom comes home and gets mad at her! You'd think she'd just be happy that her daughter is alive, and she should have thanked Marcus for saving Ella. Her mom's mental.August 10th, 2009 at 11:43pm -
I love this story! I'm so glad you've updated it ^^ I've missed it
You're such an awesome writer, seriouslyAugust 10th, 2009 at 09:53pm -
oh wow i've forgotten how much i love this story! am SOOOO glad for the reply. i love the whole voice of the story and how she's battling with her want for Marcus and omfgz. i just love it :) eheheAugust 10th, 2009 at 08:42pm
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I just finished reading this whole story, and I really like how it isn't conventional at all. The plot is inventive and the characters are believable. I adore Marcus (tehe) and i really hope you continue with this story. =)August 10th, 2009 at 04:41am
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I love this story! I just finished reading it all, and I'm already addicted.
I love all of the characters! As for that last chapter, WOW. I wouldn't exactly say Marcus is a hero, but he definitely surprised me by sticking around. Bot what was up with the guys who were trying to kidnap her?
I love this story and I can't wait to read more on it :)August 2nd, 2009 at 12:24am -
wow....update....PLEHEHEASE...*cries*July 18th, 2009 at 04:48am
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i love your storyJuly 12th, 2009 at 09:21pm
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I want to think that marcus is a hero. I really want him to like ella.
I think he kind of does.
I love the fact that this story is so realistic--but still leaps off the page.
Mr. Birch is creepy.
I hope marcus saves ella from it all--but I'm glad you're not going about it to quickly.
builds up the suspense.
I love when ella goes out doing crazy shit and buying cocaine and partying and running across town.
can we get her to start using real cuss words maybe?
I'm looking forward to see her transformation into a much sketchier character--it's exciting. I love this story!January 24th, 2009 at 12:31am -
nah;
i don't think marcus is a hero. xD
conincidence just made him seem heroic.
<3!January 23rd, 2009 at 01:45pm -
Sorry I, like quadrupal posted. My computer's acting stupid and lost connection right as I sent it. :(January 18th, 2009 at 04:33am
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I dunno, I think Marcus may actually like Ella.
I can't see him putting up with any other girl for that long.
What's up with all the strange men in Ella's life?
Mr. Birch is definitely the strangest though.January 17th, 2009 at 06:32pm -
I dunno, I think Marcus may actually like Ella.
I can't see him putting up with any other girl for that long.
What's up with all the strange men in Ella's life?
Mr. Birch is definitely the strangest though.January 17th, 2009 at 06:31pm -
I dunno, I think Marcus may actually like Ella.
I can't see him putting up with any other girl for that long.
What's up with all the strange men in Ella's life?
Mr. Birch is definitely the strangest though.January 17th, 2009 at 06:31pm -
I dunno, I think Marcus may actually like Ella.
I can't see him putting up with any other girl for that long.
What's up with all the strange men in Ella's life?
Mr. Birch is definitely the strangest though.January 17th, 2009 at 06:30pm -
I only think he did it because he knew if he didn't he'd feel guilty forever. lol.
But hey! He MIGHT actually care. Just has a weird way of showing it. XDJanuary 16th, 2009 at 02:54am -
oh, marcus.
i think he's just trying to be gallant and wonderful so he can get in her pants.
but maybe i'm just expecting the worst.January 15th, 2009 at 10:41pm -
I love how realistic and intense this is. It's definitely one of my favourite stories on here.
Marcus confuses me sometimes ): I mean, he can be a prick, but then he can be lovely so... yeah.
More very soon? This story is awesome!January 15th, 2009 at 05:53pm -
ooo loved this new update!! bit of a melodrama!
and i cant decide if i like marcus, sometimes i think he's a right twat, but like this chapter, she could've like.. died if he werent there.. so i'm torn about him ><
xxJanuary 15th, 2009 at 05:19pm
Great update. I hope Marcus doesn't hate her though. lol.
Update soon?