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LMFAO
the third chapter is greatness!
haha

You're awesome...May I just say?

Wow, you updated. This is great... =]

He put on the condom and then slowly slid his hard penis into her wet vagina. After a few minutes she told him to go faster and he did. She screamed and moaned when he bit her breasts and then came yelling his name. Then he came inside her.

I honestly didn't even know that people put pictures in their chapters...oh well. Cliches kinda bug me, but I try not to write them.

i just listened to the sound thing
OMG hilarious
this "story" totally rocks right?
ui mean duh?
what reader in their right mind would NOT read this story?
totally

i LOVE LOVE vampira's dress.
i want my prom dress to look like that.

You're awesome, Dru.
More pwease?

It's quite sad how true that is. Which only makes it even funnier.
This is one of the very few "stories" on here that makes me laugh.
Really funny. You should do more satires.

like totally??
so totally original right?
i mean coem on??
who doesnt love reading exactly the same story as you read yesterday?
duh?!?!?

I never knew that people put photos in stories. But that was hilarious.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I FUCKING PISSED MYSELF,,,no almost o.o

that is so true *agrees*

Hahahaha
This is amazing
Though i dont need to tell you that, as everyone else already has I'm sure
And yes, god it's so irritating when people use a picture of a random chick they found on the internet to describe what their Mary-Sue looks like XP

Ha.
This is hilarious! I love the part when it goes,
"And it doesn't matter that the song is about Gerard and Mikey's dead grandmother, because they all want to fuck the clothes off me anyway."

_____________________
I've got more WIT
A better KISS
A hotter TOUCH
A better [YOU KNOW!]
Than any boy you'll EVER meet
Sweetie, you had ME.

I snorted with laughter :)
But now you've made me hope my stories aren't that bad... =/

LOL! Chapter 3 was a CRACK UP.
*Sigh*
Yeah I hate how people put photos in there stories every few lines... for stories like H.O.W i spose it's okay because that's how the story goes... um if you know what I mean.
xxxKT.

This is so freaking hilarious.
I love the first chapter with you reading it, you have an awesome voice.
Like one of those crazy people that read like, 204985403985 page books out loud.
It's so good. ^_^

Part one has a sound file on it now.
It's me reading the story.

I can't help, but laugh everytime I read these.
My friends and I always talk about the heroin thing in school.
In fact, we were tallking about it today... xD

awesome!!!!
i read part of this before, and today my freind and i were actually talking about heroin in a bottle labeled with green sharpie.
love it!! then again, i always make fun of stuff so i like anything that does!!

This is brilliant.

xD GEL PENS! :lmfao

LOL