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  • aliiicimo;

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    Beautiful :)
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    November 11th, 2008 at 04:00pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    -sniff-

    ... They both died Cry
    Amazing, breath taking, suspensful ending.
    October 8th, 2008 at 08:30am
  • sh3nanigans

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    ye filleth me with sorrow, dear one.

    but it was amazing. as always!
    such talent! *claps like a fool*

    BRAVO!
    October 8th, 2008 at 12:48am
  • andiegube

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    even though the lovers were killed, it simply worked with the story.
    very Romeo and Juliet, i like that very much :]
    this story was brilliant and i loved every part of it.
    <3
    October 7th, 2008 at 11:42pm
  • MellyMassacre

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    awww *crys* that is so sad
    October 7th, 2008 at 08:29pm
  • lucylovesmcr

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    Wow. Your story was amazing. Sad, but still amazing.
    Could maybe you write the same story but with them not getting caught.
    I loved your story btw
    =) x
    October 7th, 2008 at 05:52pm
  • Mr Reckless.

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    Well,
    What a 'Suprising' ending.
    It was good.
    Me Thinks that you should never stop writing. :)
    October 7th, 2008 at 05:44pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    -Gasp-
    No!!!!!!!!!
    Oh well, I'm over it :XD
    Good story!!
    Me thinks ye should write another story soon!
    October 7th, 2008 at 12:31pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    She said she'll spare him, not kill him D:
    October 3rd, 2008 at 02:20pm
  • sh3nanigans

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    they're in love! no killing of gerard!
    that's a stupid law. wayyy stupid.

    anyway, on the the praises.

    i honestly always love everything you write!
    it's all ways amazing & different.
    you're amazingly talented.

    i'm sad for the upcoming ending.
    if feels like i just started reading this.
    October 3rd, 2008 at 01:03am
  • andiegube

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    Freddie Mercury.:
    Sorry love ^ But I still have tricks up my sleeve ;)

    the next one is the last.
    tricky Chrissie ;)
    i loved the update. it literally made me gasp. i'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next.
    October 3rd, 2008 at 12:29am
  • mizzstocker

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    NO!!!!! I love Gerard...Don't hurt him...
    October 2nd, 2008 at 08:32pm
  • lucylovesmcr

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    I am in love with your story. =)
    :( I don't want you to end it so soon
    Anyway please don't let gerard die. Does she save him?
    Grr I can't wait, update soon pretty please? x
    October 2nd, 2008 at 06:33pm
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    Fuck, nuuuuuu! D:
    :grr:
    October 2nd, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • Mr Reckless.

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    Oh Gosh.
    You can't kill him.
    That's just mean. I Won't let you kill him.
    You Meany, and the next is the last.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 05:16pm
  • Doctor.Vengeance

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    ur joking?
    the next one is the last one????

    omfg
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:58pm
  • chrissie.

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    Sorry love ^ But I still have tricks up my sleeve ;)

    the next one is the last.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:45pm
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    NOOOOOOOOOO
    No!!!!!!!!!!!
    You meany pantaloons!!!!!!!
    Please don't make him die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That means I'll cry and then I look like a loser and Gerards too smexi to die!!
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:26pm
  • lucylovesmcr

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    I love it.
    Its really good.
    Update soon please?
    x
    September 26th, 2008 at 11:06pm
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    Rofl, you really are on a roll today! Updates to two of my favourite stories, how awesome.

    Love me.
    Best thing ever.
    September 26th, 2008 at 11:01pm
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