Unlawful - Comments

update soon!!!!!

Yay =D The update was amazing.
I love your story so much.
Please update soon, I cannot wait XD
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I like this story also! It's different and different is good!

Thank you.

Hey!
Just found this and I seriously love it!
*Subscribes*
Can't wait for the next one!
xoxoxo

Poor Gerard =[
He really likes her too.

yeah im exited about this story too XD
more soon please (:

I am in love with your story too =D
It is really really good. & so different.
Please update soon I cannot wait XD
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That was a beautiful chapter. I love the way you ended it, so romantic :XD
Keep it up!

I Really like this.
it's good.
More soon??

This better not end badly!
You don't want to make me sad, cos that's just mean!

I love it! I love the sound and the style of this. Can't wait for the next update.

I love this, though I'm about 99.9% sure it's going to end badly

lol

Update soon. :weird

love this, i can already sense the heat that coming soon x]
you're amazing writer.

looks cool
you may continue ^^

This story is so different from the usual stories I have read. I really like the plot.
Its amazing so far! Update soon please? x

I Really like this story....x
it has a lot of potential.....x
More soon....x

I hope Gerard isn't killed!
Can he actually play piano in reality? I think I heard somewhere that he could...
You can totally see Gerard as a little scared servant.
So innocent with his bowl cut, and chubby cheeks!!!
Aww, I want one!

i love it...x

First chapter was great...x

more soon....x

hm. interesting. it seems like one of those cliche stories but with awesome twists that make it not cliche (if that made sense).
the first chapter was sort of short though, so i'm not 100% sure what exactly is gonna happen...but hopefully i'll find out soon!

Awesome.
xo