Unlawful - Comments, page 3

Bygeera (350)

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update soon!!!!!

September 2nd, 2008 at 10:23pm

lucylovesmcr (100)

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Yay =D The update was amazing.
I love your story so much.
Please update soon, I cannot wait XD
x

September 2nd, 2008 at 08:07pm

lacerationgravity (100)

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I like this story also! It's different and different is good!

Thank you.

September 2nd, 2008 at 02:00pm

XLadyxVengeanceX (100)

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Hey!
Just found this and I seriously love it!
*Subscribes*
Can't wait for the next one!
xoxoxo

September 2nd, 2008 at 11:51am

SNATCHLIPS (100)

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Poor Gerard =[
He really likes her too.

September 2nd, 2008 at 11:01am

diedarlingdie (100)

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yeah im exited about this story too XD
more soon please (:

September 1st, 2008 at 07:15pm

lucylovesmcr (100)

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I am in love with your story too =D
It is really really good. & so different.
Please update soon I cannot wait XD
x

August 31st, 2008 at 11:21pm

Vanya Hargreeves. (100)

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That was a beautiful chapter. I love the way you ended it, so romantic :XD
Keep it up!

August 31st, 2008 at 02:30pm

Mr Reckless. (100)

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I Really like this.
it's good.
More soon??

August 31st, 2008 at 01:01pm

SNATCHLIPS (100)

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This better not end badly!
You don't want to make me sad, cos that's just mean!

August 31st, 2008 at 11:55am

Vanya Hargreeves. (100)

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I love it! I love the sound and the style of this. Can't wait for the next update.

August 30th, 2008 at 04:39pm

Careless Whisper. (310)

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I love this, though I'm about 99.9% sure it's going to end badly

lol

Update soon. :weird

August 25th, 2008 at 02:48am

andiegube (150)

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love this, i can already sense the heat that coming soon x]
you're amazing writer.

August 22nd, 2008 at 08:26pm

blackmcr (100)

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looks cool
you may continue ^^

August 22nd, 2008 at 04:01pm

lucylovesmcr (100)

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This story is so different from the usual stories I have read. I really like the plot.
Its amazing so far! Update soon please? x

August 22nd, 2008 at 02:08pm

Mr Reckless. (100)

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I Really like this story....x
it has a lot of potential.....x
More soon....x

August 22nd, 2008 at 01:32pm

SNATCHLIPS (100)

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I hope Gerard isn't killed!
Can he actually play piano in reality? I think I heard somewhere that he could...
You can totally see Gerard as a little scared servant.
So innocent with his bowl cut, and chubby cheeks!!!
Aww, I want one!

August 22nd, 2008 at 11:49am

Mr Reckless. (100)

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i love it...x

First chapter was great...x

more soon....x

August 17th, 2008 at 08:29pm

x.Kris.x (100)

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hm. interesting. it seems like one of those cliche stories but with awesome twists that make it not cliche (if that made sense).
the first chapter was sort of short though, so i'm not 100% sure what exactly is gonna happen...but hopefully i'll find out soon!

August 15th, 2008 at 07:11am

Ms. Chanandler Bong (100)

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Awesome.
xo

August 13th, 2008 at 09:22pm