And She Made the Shape of My Heart With Her Hands - Comments

aweee this story was so cute! i'm def team john and I really can't explain why, maybe because i've always prefered John idk. I HOPE SHE GETS WITH JOHN IN THE SEQUEL. although ahaha I wouldn't mind if she got with kennedy.

soo, i just finished reading this story. i read the whole thing like in 2 days? yeah.
im sorry i didnt comment on each chapter. =/
but anyway, i loved the story. :D

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
just about everything, i'd say.
-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
i'm gonna have to go with Pat. (: i have nothing against John at all, but Pat's just, well Pat. haha
-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
Im afraid to say John, but hopefully Pat. who knows?
-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
nothing at all. its was perfect.
-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
yes yes, i am about to go begin reading it. :D

amazing, amazinggg story :D

okay, i wanted to read it all before commenting.
this is epically amazing, and
i'm supporting john,

why, it's that i don't like pat, I love that boy to death.
i just think the way she feels with John seems stronger than with pat.

I don't this there is a single word in the dictionary that explains how much i loved this story! so I'll make one up, give me a second...
amazove, that's it, i amazove this story,
see, new word pwn-age.

I'm off to read the sequel,
da do, da do, da doo.
See ya on the sequels comment board.

so, when they were talking "like canadians", i was laughing like crazy.
my family's canadian, and my sister went to the US (i forget where, haha)
and someone asked her to say "ay".

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i'm on chapter seven! it's soooo good :D

This was an AMAZING story!!
I know I'm like the last one to read it but I found it by accident and have been reading it non-stop for the past couple of days.....time well spent!!
Just about to start the sequel =]
LOVED IT!!!

just got done chapter 24 :]
and I'm def team Pat

just got done chapter 24 :]
and I'm def team Pat

I'm officially done chapter 1
Its really good so far :D

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
realistic.
-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
PAT! He's cuter, and more innocent.
-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
PAT! 'Cause I like Pat more.
-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
Oh dear. iunoo.
-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
DUH! TEAM PAT!
I loved this<3333

I just read this story for the first time and finished it after a few days and it's amazing! I really love this story! Post the sequel really soon please :)

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
I like how it was written and the overall plot. Most stories I read are either well-written and have not a very solid plot, or have a solid plot and are poorly written but this story is good in both :) I also really like how sweet Pat is in this.
-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
I support Pat more, because he just seems so adorable and sweet when you write this. He seems like he's just the perfect boyfriend when you write this. I like John, but Pat is definitely the one I support more.
-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
I'm hoping she'll end up with Pat, but I have a feeling it might just be John. Hopefully it'll be Pat though because I really like him in this story :)
-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
When you write what Cara wears, it's always so... detailed. I love detail, but so much detail in clothes and hair and makeup just isn't the best... Sorry if this is harsh :( I don't want to discourage you or anything! I really do love this story!
-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
Uh, hells yeah! I can't wait for the sequel :D

Well that's my response to this lovely story! Seriously, post the sequel soon :D I'll be waiting!

Loved it :D

Im super excited for the sequel

Q: What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
A: First off, I like the chapter titles and I just thought I'd throw that out there. I reallyreally like how Cara seems like a real person and not just a fictional character. She is easy to relate to. But I pretty much like everything about this story so yeahh.

Q: Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
A: TEAM JOHN OHHH. I support him because whenever he's around Cara you never know what to expect. Like sure, they always are kissing but I mean what they say. It just seems spontaneous and I think that, that's a good kind of relationship.

Q: Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
A: Pat because they are like the most adorable couple ever. Aww. :'D And John will end up all alone or something, and it will make me sad but I'll deal.

Q: What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
A: I just think the chapters are better when you add more detail. Like paragraphs of detail and explaining as opposed to a line or two between the talking.

Q: Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
A: Yes ma'am, yes I will!

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
Everything, haha, the one chapter that stood out to me and that I still remember was: the one in which they went swimsuit shopping and it think the one after that when she got found out belly button ring wise; that part(for some odd reason) is the one part I remember the bestest, haha.
(plus, I read that part in the bath XD)

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
Ehh, they've both pull nearly equal weight, I never chose a team.
I want her to be with Pat; but at the same time I want her to be with John.
John because he knows what he's doing, really, he has more experiance and is pretty damn attractive.(though i'd much rather, personally, be his bff them his girly frenn)
and,
Pat because he's adorable, sweet, has KREIGHZEE hair that grows at an oddly fast speed, and would be a less intimidating first boyfriend at least.

-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
Honestly, I think John.
Just cause.

-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA;
NO!!!!
This story was beyond perfect; i'd stop writing on here and re-write my story into a damn book if I could write as well as you!
(but please don't, I would be a very very very sad girl)

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
DUHH!

ElizabethAnne: Thank you for being the only reader to actually put my stuff on your phone and read it in the bathtub. Well, unless I understood that wrong. XD

You totally understood that right, haha.
I read in the bath...sometimes.
not very often though, I dunz want my phone to get water damage, haha.

chapter 39570239(iforget the actual number) was good, Kenny's a funny boyy, haha.
I'm the same as Pat was in this in movies, I don't have the attention span for them; at all.
haha.
Water, water, water, water, hahaha, Garrett split water and got his panties all bunched up over it XD
goodness you never seem to cease to amuse me with the things in your updates. :D

Hey, I've absolutely fallen in LOVE with your story and I can't wait for the sequel. <3

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
I loved the fact that there was drama...but not too much like some other stories. Just the right amount to keep me hooked. The hilarious and also the serious conversations that were incorporated throughout this story made it amazing/more life-like. There's a reason you have all of these people reading this story! :-)

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
I kinda feel weird about saying this because most people are on Team Pat, but at the moment, I'm supporting John. Pat is such a sweetheart in this story and he would be good with Cara also, but I want to see what it would be like with her and John for a bit.

-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
Honestly, I have no idea...right now they both seem like a good choice so it's completely up in the air.

-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
Nothing. The entire story was FANTASTIC!

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
Do you even have to ask?? HECK YES! :D

What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
i loved the relationship between Garrett and Cara. Sooo cute (:

Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
John. Because he seems more confident and independant & that's well sexyyy ;)

Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
John.

What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
Maybe more scenes on tour that werent actually set at the venues.

Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
YES! :D

.xoxo

Just when I thought the whole Cara/John thing was done and dusted, they bring it all back up.
I loved the ending. Anyhow, in answer to your questions....

What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
Hmm, cliche, but I did like all of it. It's one of the few stories on here that I find easy to read, without becoming bored. But my favourite parts would be all the little bits of comedy you put in there to lighten the mood of it overall.

Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
Hm. I'm finding this decision harder each time I read a new chapter. But at the moment, I'm kinda in favour of both of them. Pat, just because he doesn't get enough attention in stories, and they do sound rather cute together and John because you can sense the tension between him and Cara, they want each other, but Cara doesn't want to admit that.

Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
Pat.

What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
I honestly don't think there's anything you could improve on. It's definitely one of my favourite stories on here.

Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
Of course I will. You can't leave it hanging like that and not expect us to be wanting more. :mrgreen:

I think I'maa add you, so I'll know when the sequel is up.

gahh amazing ending
stupid John Ohh!

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
ilike love the fact its a Pat story :D
and i like that theres basically a compition for Cara's love
that Pat is wining cause he pwns

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
TEAM PATRICK KIRCH cause i dont think he gets enough love.

-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
PAT!!!!!! i'm probably gonna be mad if she doesnt end up with him

-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
i honestly cant answer that, i liked the whole thing.

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
oh most deffinatly<3

btw....
TEAM PAT! TEAM PAT! TEAM PAT! TEAM PAT!