And She Made the Shape of My Heart With Her Hands - Comments

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
The reason why I like your story is because its an emotional spaz. Sometimes its simply content, sometimes its burning in a hole of passionate fire.

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
Kennedy. Because he's luscious.

-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
Hoping? Kennedy (Team Sexy Pants- very sexy pants). Most likely? John or Pat (probably John). What would be really freaky-deaky? Garrett (ha ha, Team Incest!).

-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
I didn't like that Kennedy was never seen without a shirt off. Besides that I would look at other people's suggestions.

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
Yes. Even if it doesn't have a hot, steamy hot tub scene with Kennedy.

<3 honestly, this is the BEST story ever and i love it soooo much! Im gonna miss reading it until you get the sequel up!

I guess i'll answer your questions now:
1) i love everything about the story!!! seriously! especially how long it is :) and it was great writing
2) TEAM PAT ALL THE WAY! He's just so cute :) and sweet and i think that's what Cara needs...although you made John out to be AWESOME!
3) I think Cara will probably end up with John...I dont want her to, but i have a feeling that's the way it will play out. Whatever you decide will be great, though!
4) Sorry, but i really liked everything about the story and your writing! Keep it up <3
5) HELL YES im going to read the sequel!! like i said, i cant wait!!

oh my. this story is pretty much my addiction...sadly.
anywhoo, i am anxiously waiting for the sequel to take place and what it will bring :)

and now for the questionaire!

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
everythannnggg :D

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
if i really had to choose i support PAT, why? because he is Pat Kirch :)

-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?
i think she mighttt go with John buuut then i'm still rooting for Pat.

-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
no improvement needed, you are amazing. keep it up :)

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
of coursee, like i said, i am addicted to this story.
sadly hehe.

<3

CAITLIN! YOU STUD, YOU!
I FUCKING LOVED THE ENDING!
Stupid John.
I'm a hypocrite.
He's my theme on here right now.
I kinda forgot. :lmfao :lmfao
HE'S STILL STUPID!
A's to your Q's time!

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best?
Everything, darling. Everything.

-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why?
TEAM PAT KIRCH!-Who do you think she’ll really end up with?PAT! PAT! PAT!-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it?
I loved it all. Don't change anything.

-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel?
DUH! Especially cus of Garrett
And KennyCuddles, of course :arms: :arms:The things I would do to both of those boys.

I absolutely loved this.
You must let me know the second you post the sequel.
I'm so excited!
:crazy: :crazy:TEAM PATRICK MOTHER FUCKING KIRCH PWNS THE SHIT OUT OF YOUR LIFE!

Yes, I will follow the story into the sequel.
and I'm totally on Team John!!!!!!!!
Though I really like Pat, I think she'd be better with John.
^_^

this is the defintion of amazing.

-What did you like about my story or what did you like best? i liked that two boys liked her at once. the suspense was great
-Who do you support, John or Pat, and why? team pat! cause he's amazing and adorable?
-Who do you think she’ll really end up with? pat
-What is something you didn’t like about the story, or what could I do to improve it? uh...nothing really.
-Will you follow along with the story into the sequel? pshh...YEAH

great last chapter

well i really like the relationships between the characters
how Cara has a love hate relationship with her brother,
is really good friends with the band,
and has deeper feelings for two of the band members
and I really liked the description you used to show her confusion about the two

I'm not really sure who's side I'm on..I like both Pat and John, but I've got a feeling that Pat will let Cara get with John, seeing as Pat's a really nice guy and just wants to see Cara happy. He might give those two a chance

looking forward to readin the sequel!
keep up the good writing!

asra

i loved this story!
oh. i personally support both pat and john..
pat is just so loveable and cute and is my favorite
but then again john is hot and has an amazing voice..
i cant decide. =]
i will deff. be following the sequel!! =]

IT'S OVERRR!!
The end of an era...OF CARA!! so jokes!

To answer your questions:
1) I liked the way you portrayed the characters, Pat was very real and ADORABLE!

2) Uhhh...John. SYKE!! That would be weird...PAT OBVIOUSLY!! Need I tell you why?? okay, the eyes, the lips, the NOSE and of course his body!! Oh yeah, and his personalities okay...I guess. HAHA!!

3) I believe Cara will end up alone in a house with cats, lots of cats. I HOPE SHE'S ALLERGIC!!! She doesn't deserve either of them with what she always seems to do to Pat even though she makes it out like John's sexually harrassing her but she doesn't seem to push away...

4) I think the story could improve in the fact that the others are rarely in it. Also, when John is in the story, it's only when he's kissing Cara. He never really seems to be with the band most of the time...

5) Nahh, I don't think I'll follow the sequal... ARE YOU KIDDING ME??!! OBVIOUSLY IMA FOLLOW EVERY WORD OF ITTT!!!

I LOVE YOU!!!

I can't wait for the sequal to drop!!
xx
KATIE

Coughh. TeamJohnnyboy. :]

it's only the beginning. perrrrrfect.

i love how pat cant sit still for a movie, it's adorable :]
Team Pat Kirch FTW

i love how pat cant sit still for a movie, it's adorable :]
Team Pat Kirch FTW

Yay i got mentioned! Lol yeah so im working off a cell hence the reason i havent commented in ever. Your still amazing and this is probably my favorite story on here. Love <3

Aw, thank you for the shout out. I didn't realize I'd been reading this since August.

I loved when Pat got fidgety in the movie. That poor kid. :]
And the Camille and Kennedy relationship is quite cute.

I'll skip the whole "yay team John Ohh" and just say I'm stoked for the sequel.

I loved it
and thank you for the shout out.
:]

So This is my comment i through in every now and then.
I Love this story alot, it makes me smile :)
I cannot waittt for the sequel.
So yeah, keep on writing : )

AWWWWEEEEE THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE SHOUT OUT. :D
i loved this story so much i just HAD to make a banner for it. awesome chapters, and as per usual, i agree with Garrett Nickelsen.

AYE YO. TEAM PAT REIGNS SUPREME. :D

Awww Caitlin I love you :arms: :arms: :arms:
Kenny was adorable in this chapter. I love how he's always overly excited. About everything :tehe:
:lmfao :lmfao Garrett, on the other hand, is a dumbas. You'd think he would check to see what he spilled before having a spaz attack over it.
BUT! He's still incredibly sexayyyy
I feel bad that Patrick can't stay still :tehe:
One more chapter!
YAY SEQUEL! :crazy: :crazy: :crazy:

TEAM PAT KIRCH TIL THE DEATH, YO!

AWHH!!
I love youss!!
That chapter was, once again, fucking incroyable!
And, haha, NO TRACE OF JOHN OHH!!
As much as I love John, HE'S RUINING P&C (or at least he was)
And Kenny&Camille, TOO CUTE!!
Garrett is always a good smile and hotness, always hotness with GareNickel!!
He's sexy...
However, TEAM KONACO WILL PREVAIL!!
I promise...
haha!!
Next chapter is last....but SEQUALL!!!
HIPHIPFUCKINGHOORAYY!!!!
Love you!!
Katie