The Suicide Note of Frank Iero - Comments

Powerful, beautiful, pretty much perfect.

Amazing.
It was beautifully written =]

oh my god this story is just way too perfect. love this so much.

I almost started to cry. Like... they were really ready to break free.
It was really good.
I love it.
It's like... a tragic romance movie plot line. Sorta.
I loved it.

Oh my gosh that was incredible. Amazing, truly. The ending line was especially powerful. The "Angel getting his wings" part. You're an awesome writer. :arms:

Wow that was really good.
I liked it, very well writen.
Though you always write
Amazing stories!!

:O
my eyes were glued to my computer screen. it was physically impossible for me to look away. It felt like I was there, and that i was hearing frank read it.

bravo! *claps*

wow that was amazing.
awesome choice of song as well.
amazing.

That was really great!
The last few lines were excellent, and the whole way through, there wasn't a single bad part.
I loved it, well done :arms:

xoxoxox

Holy shit!
Make me fucking cry.
Oh my gosh.
This is so amazing.
It's just too perfect to even start to descirbe it.
This is the best piece that I've ever read.

Wow
That was amazing, and beautiful, and, fuck I don't know what else
But it sure as hell was a lot!
I wanted to cry, it was just so...so!

Please make it a TwoShot!
I want to know about the hurt and pain Gerard goes through because he does love Frankie and Frankie just killed himself!!
'Cuz that's gotta be how it is!

-gasp-
Would Gerard kill himself after that?!!?
Oooo now I really wanna know!!!

Update??

very well written! i liked it alot!

=O
OMG! I LOOOVE THIS!
I wish I could write like you. seriously.
I could never capture as much emotion as you just did.
simply. amazing.

YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!!!!!! AH AH AAHHH!!!! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! Why Frank? WHY!?

Well done! i bow at your feet! Bravo!

That was [beautiful] it made me cry...='] amazing one-shot...

That was amazing ...... beautiful in a dark sad way! wonderfully written! This prives you can write things well without putting sex in things! I thought you;d be able to do it and now you've proved it!
xxx

Damnit, that's just so ... realistic, almost like it could have happened (apart from Frank killing himself, obviously!). I loved it!!

This story was so beautiful.
I would also like to see a second chapter, just because every chapter you write is pure bliss.
I liked how it told what Frank was feeling, and how he thought Gerard was feeling.

Also the way it makes the reader imagine exactly what Gerard was thinking and how he would react.

The little things you left out made it so amazing. Made you want to keep reading and trying to figure out why he did what he did.

I loved the way Frank reminded me of a lost puppy. Begging for love. Hoping he’s get it, but knowing all the while that he wouldn’t.

I’d love to read more of these non-sexual one shots. Though the sexual ones are still good =]

Oh man Zap..
This is amazing.
One of your best one shots.
It's obvious you put alot of thought into it.
It's different from all your other one shots, but i love it.
This made me all teary and everything, the ednig was perfect.
Amazing Zap, just amazing.
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