The Suicide Note of Frank Iero - Comments

That was amazing. It was like...I dunno, i can't describe it. And I'm crying :(
But oh well, i love this soooooooooo much.
I bet Gerard really did love him, thats why he let him go so far that time when he had just broken up with his girlfriend. But he was just scared about it. =/

I hope to god this doesn't really happen, cuz it sounds plausible

*Has.To.Read.Again*
Edit: I'ma do a bigger comment, cuz I'm bored and love you so much =]

It was horrible walking in and finding you in bed with someone other than your girlfriend that morning.

I see I'm not the only one who thinks Eliza was lying when she said nothing happened:shifty
He must have really loved Gerard to keep a secrete like that. I mean it would be heartbreaking just to see it, but he kept on loving him after and thats real love.

I figured out that I might've had a chance with you. WRONG.

That makes me really feel for him. He wants them to be together, but Gerard clearly has other ideas

Call me a rebel or call me a dipshit, but I grabbed a piece of metal and sliced my ankle. And every so often I'd keep doing it. It was my secret addiction.

Thats when i started crying, gaahhh. Frankie

Then, I found myself eating twice the amount of food each day. It provided comfort.

Frankie's really starting to get a little chubby though isn't he?
I comfort eat a lot. Its horrible when you eat so much it makes you feel sick. But at the same time you feel that its helping you for no apparent reason.

And so you married her. Sometimes I think it was just so that you could spite me.

It's so bad that he was trying to think that Gerard married her just to spite him. When he knows deep down that he didn't

I remember that one time you had the wet dream which freaked out Mikey because he was in the same bed as you. You asked me if you'd said anything embarrassing out loud. Everyone else had been asleep except for me when you'd had that dream, so I lied. I said you didn't say anything embarrassing. But really, you did. When you climaxed, while rubbing your cock up against my thigh, I heard you quietly moan my name. I wasn't stupid. I knew you had feelings for me.

I know its a sad story, but that part made me laugh a little. But i was still crying at the same time :shock:

And then there were all the times that you would come to me for comfort when you were dealing with depression while on the road. You'd talk to me, and just want to snuggle up with me backstage before a show.

And all of that made Franks feelings grow stronger. Un-knowingly to Gerard.

But after I'd led you over to my hotel bed and pulled you on top of me. After I'd unbuttoned your top to reveal that chest which made my cock stand to attention, you got off of me, brought up the fact that I had a girlfriend, and left. You broke my heart.

Like i said, Gerard probably got scared and left. But he should have thought more about what he was doing before he did it. Because it would make Frank feel like he's being led on.

Gerard, you need to learn to keep that mouth of yours shut sometimes. Some of the stuff you say can hurt.

So true, I know from experience

Then you fucking moved to the other side of the country. It was almost like you were abandoning everyone. Your family, your friends. And for what? The whole fakeness of LA? Bullshit Gerard. You hated those sorts of people. Why did you really move away? Was it so that you didn't have to see me? Because it was so hard not to see your face.

Absence makes the heart grow fonder Frankie

He brought the gun slowly to his head and without thinking, he pulled the trigger. That day, an angel received his wings.



The way you wrote it, really did make it seem like it could happen. Because you used actually events and put them into it. You know i love all your stories but i'ma say it again

I love your stories

:( That was so sad.
It's a nice change from your usual one-shots, I'm glad you wrote something else other than sex :)
Amazingly written, the feelings and emotions you put in really makes you connect with the character. Awesome job :D

Wow..

That was amazing, aw, shit I'm even crying now..
seriously that was beautiful! That's is definitely the best story/one-shot you have ever written! This is one of the best stories/one-shots I have ever read! There aren't a lot of stories that really makes me cry, I mean I often feel like crying when I read sad stuff but me actually crying is really rare, and now the tears were just pouring, and I'm still.. like in shock, I guess..

and that last line, That day, an angel received his wings. is brilliant.. (oh fuck, I think I'm gonna cry again)
The whole story was fantastic, it's perfect in every way and the last line really was a great way to end it.

:arms:

Oooh. That was awesome :)

Everyone**

I loved it. Very realistic. I wonder if Gerard did love him. *shrug* It'd be interesting to find out Gerard's reaction.
Every jumps for joy at being first to comment, so...
5TH COMMENT!! HELL YEAH!!! :P

So sad. It almost made me cry
Damn u Gerard!!

So sad. It almost made me cry
Damn u Gerard!!

Beautiful.

illegally_legal took the words right out of my mouth. I loved it :)

first comment! :D
despite the grim situation of this, I found this somwhat beautiful in a depressing way, which is a cool kind of beautiful :D
aww... Frank...
Gee's a prick
you're amazing! :D

Let me say in advance, thank you to everyone who actually read this. It's the first one-shot I've ever written without sex in it. So thanks to those who actually read it.

Thanks in advance to anyone who comments.

I love you readers.

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ZAP!