The Suicide Note of Frank Iero - Comments

That's Zap for you, a one shot that's only been up a few hours, is already on it's second page of comments, soon to be (or if this comment takes long enough ALREADY) more. You're an amazing writer and on a usual day, this would have brought me to tears. I want to leave this great long comment, but that never works with small fonts and my mentality. So I'll just recap; You're amazing, This story's amazing, and I can't begin to imagine how you've become the God of fanfic that you are.

-Bows to The Lightning Zap-

This was so depressing, in a good kinda way....if that makes any sense at all...
Its amazing!

Lies for a Liar:

Wow.I agree with Masquerading Harlot, it would be kinda cool to see Gerard's reaction. Although that'd be really hard to write, well I know I probably wouldn't be able to do it, but I'm sure you'd be able to if you gave it a shot. Eheh, just a suggestion. I feel like I'm pushing :/ I don't mean to push. /edit/ You already answered that question/suggestion :cute:

Anyway, you succeeded in making me cry, thanks. It's different and I like it. It's nice to have something that doesn't end in sunshine and roses for once. It kinda reminds me of something I wrote a long, long time ago but never posted anywhere. I quite like suicides & suicide notes, they're interesting (that isn't meant in a way that I like it when people kill themselves. I like the style of writing better (Y)).

Bravo. I think that means something like 'well done' or 'congratulations' or something in French... I hope it does.

I think it's congrats in italian ;) :D
And cheers :)

holy crap poor frank i love this its so different from your usually writing its creepy yet amazing

Oh, Zap.
You made my cry.
That's not nice.
:(

that was so intense.
i don't ever want to think about frankie dying or killing himself.
so don't do it again! lol
you ma'am amaze me.

Wow.I agree with Masquerading Harlot, it would be kinda cool to see Gerard's reaction. Although that'd be really hard to write, well I know I probably wouldn't be able to do it, but I'm sure you'd be able to if you gave it a shot. Eheh, just a suggestion. I feel like I'm pushing :/ I don't mean to push. /edit/ You already answered that question/suggestion :cute:

Anyway, you succeeded in making me cry, thanks. It's different and I like it. It's nice to have something that doesn't end in sunshine and roses for once. It kinda reminds me of something I wrote a long, long time ago but never posted anywhere. I quite like suicides & suicide notes, they're interesting (that isn't meant in a way that I like it when people kill themselves. I like the style of writing better (Y)).

Bravo. I think that means something like 'well done' or 'congratulations' or something in French... I hope it does.

Okay, I'll be really honest here... you almost made me cry.
I never cry with stories, but this one shot is really really good. I loved it, every word of it.

Amazing story and it doesn't matter if it didn't have sex. <3

Holy crap.

This whol thing was amazing and I'm glad you picked me to beta it. It was a really good read and it had me choking up, ask Merissa. She was there when I read it. But, you're an amazing writer and you know how to get your fans into it. That is a rare talent, that a lot of 'writers' lack. You're one of them that doesn't lack it. Bravo! On a job well done :applause: I can't wait to read more from you, as your stories are always amazing.

-tear- i hate PMS and a sad story.

which was beautiful by the way...omg all teh stories I have been reading have had sad chapters lately...well except the list

but...-sniff- i really am in a sad mood. i feel like watching sad movie and ewating popcorn and icecream all day now...

great job. very perfect in the serious sense

I saw the link and all of your stories are amazing so I knew I had to check it out.
I actually really like this.
That probably made me look like I'm a heartless bitch but I just can't explain it.
My favorite part:
P.S - Don't blame yourself. It's my fault that things have come to this. Sometimes, you just can't help who you fall in love with.
But in some twisted way it really was Gerard's fault.
Well both of their faults.
I agree with what you wrote.
It would take away what Frank was feeling.
It's very non-cliche and I think if you added the second chapter it would just, well I really don't know how to describe that.
Well anyways, when I was done reading it I was almost to the point of tears.
Every one of your stories it truly amazing.
Your deffinatly one of my favorite authors on here.

This was an amazing story. I really liked it.
It was beautiful in a depressing way...It really touched me.
Again, this was amazing.

Amy-Faye:

*Adds another thought*

You should make this a two-shot, so we can see Gerards reaction =]
Only a thought tho

I've read the story 7 times now XD

Firstly, thank you for your very nice long comment :)

And secondly in regards to writing Gerard's reaction, I had planned on doing that, but then I figured that it might take everything away from Frank's whole feelings, which was what I was originally trying to capture. I originally didn't have the P.S part, because I was gonna write a chapter about Gerard getting depressed and blaming himself, but I figured it would be best without a second chapter, and so I added in the P.S bit :)

Dude. Awesome. Really really good.

This was pretty much brilliant. Wow.
I really dont know what there is else to say.

omg... i think i may cry. i mean, i cried in AIYHSB when gee and frank were being held hostage, but this takes crying to a new level. srsly, girl, there are NO words to decribe how jealous i am of you and your fabnosity.

*hugs and cookies*

You left me speechless...and now I'm all...

I agree with Amy-Faye's last comment. I'd love to see Gerard's reaction if you have time.

*Adds another thought*

You should make this a two-shot, so we can see Gerards reaction =]
Only a thought tho

I've read the story 7 times now XD

Wow, you write one hell of a one-shot! This was one of the greatest one-shots I've read. Converse All Stars. pretty much sums it up. Beautiful. The song choice was really good, too.

That was beautiful.
You carried the story really well; it was easy to follow but not too straightforward. Frankie's tone was kept perfectly; no lapses, no changes of character, the way a lot of narration is on this site. I honestly believed it was a real note. You got the sense of desperation in really well, as if he had to tell Gerard everything before he died. I can almost hear him saying 'Ah, f*ckit,' and pouring his heart out. It has a sort of dark humour to it, as well; I felt that if we were watching Frank write it, he'd be laughing in places at his own 'stupidity' (as he thought it).

Overall, it was a great piece; I really, really enjoyed it. You're an amazing writer.

Yeah, first serious, sad, but other beautiful oneshot :) Ahhh, now I´m like the weather outside, very teary...lol, so crymaking...