I just don't even know what to say? Loved it? HELL YEAH. Hated it? Absolutely. My rage and emotions were all over the place. Wonderful writing ability!
OMFG!!! i just read this whole story in less than 24 hours O_O i swear i cried for like 2 out of the 24 omg this is crazy now im going to go read the sequael cuz im losing my lil brain cells and hypervetalating lolx gawd i seeem strange right now but omg this story had me wanting to kill brian omg i trusted him (even tho that sounds odd) and he just fucked up everything D: omgx i like matt ans all but i soooo thought brian and anna wouldve made it and really despise the blond for breaking them up! ( no offences to blonds because im naturally one ) and matt hiring her to break them up and 4 brian being weak to resist her :( oh wellz ! :D i loved the story and now going to read the sequael so ty for writing this story :)
Wow this story is absolutely amazing..I couldn't stop reading it since the first chapter. I can't believe that Matt is going to bail Brian and Jimmy out or that Matt planned for Nubba to cross Brian's path. I cant' wait to get started on the sequel right now. :D Amazing story.
Ahhhhhhhhh omg i lovee this story.... just like your other one... I read it all within like two hours its addicting... and yes I totallyyyy screamed when it said the end with a question mark AHHHH
Please don't end it here! I love this story so much! I know I haven't commented in a while, but I forgot the password to my e-mail, I know I'm a dumbass. Anyways, I really adore this story! Ana is the most amazing character and she can always get out of situations, no matter what the price is. She's strong and independent and she deserves to go back to Matt and their son. I hope Matt doesn't hurt her when he finds her, if you do decide to continue the story. I love the ending though. Adorable and hectic. Matt is as always the boss! I loved it and I would definitely read if you decide to make a sequel!
Holy shit. This story is hands down amazing! It's well written, creative, intense, dramatic, and a lot of other fucking words. Please, let there be a sequel!
Bullfuckingshit! I don't for one second believe that Brian knows where in the hell Ana is. There's no way in hell he knows. Okay, he could know through business associates but why hasn't HE gone after her in the almost two years? Oh, holy hells. If there's not a sequel to this, I think I shall just slowly go insane. You're not that mean, I know you're not.
What a great ending! I hate the fact that Ana left her kid but I think Matt would be a pretty awesome father. I love Brian even though he's so evil in this. Now question is, does Matt want to find Ana because he loves her or because he wants to punish her in some way for leaving them..? ;) Once again, great ending.
WHAT?! You're going to make a sequel... well, that is smart; there might actually be life after that another story, right? :)
I liked this way ending it even more. you're good. very good... :D I hope you'll make a sequel about it. heh, even if I usually hate sequels! hihii...
Gotta tell you my dear, randomly, I dunno why, I had the best dream last night... like the best dream ever! o_O it was fuelled by the start of the part between nuuba and brainy bee, especially when I wrote about it on my comment. gah. I WANT TO GO BACK TO SLEEP! >.<
I gotta say, if you chose to do another one I am on it!!! It would be interesting to see how Matt and Ana would react to one another if he did find her. And how she would react to her son. Syn deserves to get his backside invaded in jail. lol Damn him for having leverage on Matt! I love this story, well, I love every story you've posted. But this one has kept my interest for ever! Its sad to see it go but I think you did just an awesome job ending it. I am very impressed.
I gotta conclude by saying, I heart you and I can't wait to read more from your imagination soon!