Don't Scream If You Love Me - Comments

  • bloodravyn

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    good!
    i hope he nuuba hurts the way anna is!
    May 9th, 2009 at 08:23am
  • A7Xmcs

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    Damn fucking hormones made me cry! That was so not fair. All aroused one moment and then crying the next. What in the hell did you kill Matt for? I still know you have something up your sleeve--I just sense it--but Johnny sure as hell better stand the hell up and be the man he has been to Ana all along and at least be the kids uncle for Christ's (no pun intended) sake. Grr, Jules, grr.
    May 6th, 2009 at 06:12pm
  • Roxmysoxoff

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    Okay, I just started sobbing. I was rooting for Matt the whole time because he treated her better and cared for her more. If he's seriously dead, I and going to be a very unhappy peerson. That was the most depressing chapter I've read and it better be followed by happy ones....DAMNIT! *cries even harder*
    May 6th, 2009 at 07:12am
  • Sugartrout

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    Cry Well damn.

    Okay. Ah, good this is only fiction, cause if that sex-scene would ever happen to me, I would kick that man into the next century or whatever... I do not do analsex, like... ever. Period.
    And this made me think of some old things, which was both bad and dood. Still, thanks for that even you didn't mean it. ;) heh..

    Am I like an idiot, when I still don't belive Matt is dead. there's some great masterplan coming, right??? >:D like, he will jump out from the coffin just like in that silly fall out boy video. I know where you got your inspiration woman! :twisted:
    *cough*ELFPORN*cough*

    Or Syn's going to jump on the coffin and play his guitar.

    OR and this is a good one!!!! All the guys kill each other at the funeral and Nuuba and Ana will get together as lovers and continue the legacy of underground-criminal Gods their loser men followed. Dance sounds good doesn't it?

    Eww... I'm still all freaked out by the analsex. my bum is only for me. Thanx. xD lol. but it did uplift my mood and get it down a bit. I shed a tear on the seuquence of Matt's 'supposed-death' thingy....

    <3 Update soon!
    May 5th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • MissMurder424

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    NOOOOO I hope Johnny and Zack find out so he can get was coming for him
    May 5th, 2009 at 04:07pm
  • D. Dixon

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    RavynBlu:
    No! I am oddly sad right now. We finally get a chance to connect to him in a more of a human way and Brian had to kill him. I cannot wait to see how this story is concluded.

    Maybe Matt is in the witness protection program or something (he goes to the cops and says Brian was the mastermind of the whole thing. "I'll talk if you help me out." shit.) and in like 3 years he comes back and takes Ana and their child somewhere. And they live happily ever after.
    btw, i agree with her^
    May 5th, 2009 at 01:25pm
  • D. Dixon

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    aww!
    Cry
    matt's dead.
    :(
    *sob*
    loved the update
    more soon
    May 5th, 2009 at 01:24pm
  • RavynBlu

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    No! I am oddly sad right now. We finally get a chance to connect to him in a more of a human way and Brian had to kill him. I cannot wait to see how this story is concluded.

    Maybe Matt is in the witness protection program or something (he goes to the cops and says Brian was the mastermind of the whole thing. "I'll talk if you help me out." shit.) and in like 3 years he comes back and takes Ana and their child somewhere. And they live happily ever after.
    May 5th, 2009 at 07:30am
  • rockcitynosebleed

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    For some strange reason I became very hungry while reading this...

    And why I'm feeling sorry for Brian is beyond me.
    May 5th, 2009 at 05:01am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    omg noooo Matt can't die!! Cry Cry Cry
    things were finally getting better, Brian is going to pay big time.
    it was def. worth the wait
    exactly
    May 3rd, 2009 at 04:42am
  • ThePiesEndure

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    I'm crying...how could you kill Matt....

    amazing update...just amazing defo worth the wait
    May 2nd, 2009 at 03:08am
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    Fuck, that was cold-hearted, even for him.
    April 28th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • beautiful_addict.

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    omg noooo Matt can't die!! Cry Cry Cry
    things were finally getting better, Brian is going to pay big time.
    it was def. worth the wait
    April 27th, 2009 at 11:31pm
  • RavynBlu

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    Noooooo! He can't die. Ana finally got her life sorted and then her man die. Not good. Brian's karama better be coming for him!!!
    April 27th, 2009 at 11:09pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    What in the living hell, Jules? I mean, seriously. If your dreams are like this, then holy hell, don't dream anymore damnit! I swear to you I will fly over there hugely knocked up and do awful things! I will! lol Anyway, what in the fuck? Jesus. Not cool. Matt, Brian, not cool. But, Matt took it like a man, and frankly, it was sexy as hell.
    April 27th, 2009 at 10:43pm
  • RockOut

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    he fucking killed matt!?!?!?! hell fucking no :-( Awww, shitty. Well at least he promised to leave Ana alone, i guess that is good. anywho i enjoyed the update. Ooo and 2 weeks til you pop the kid out? That's extremely exciting, congrats!
    April 27th, 2009 at 10:18pm
  • bloodravyn

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    OMFG!!!!!
    HOW COULD YOU KILL MATT?!
    I HATE BRIAN THE BASTARD!
    April 27th, 2009 at 06:46pm
  • Sugartrout

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    HAHAAAAAAA! You updated you sneaky pregnant woman!!!!! :D

    okay, emm.. where to start? That was an awesome chapter. Damn, I hate the word: awesome... But tend to use it too often. Anyway, yes. A wonderful chapter. I have a very strong feeling Matt didn't die. Nope, either he was wearing the good ol' classic: the bullet vest (and Johnny had pulled some odd fake-blood prank, because he's the clever one) or Brian's shift is bad and he didn't hit the heart. It's like perfectly possible that the bullet just goes in, but doesn't hit any important organ. like, I saw that in Grey's Anatomy! o_O makes sense to me.

    All hail to M Shadows.
    Who did call me a Scandinavian bitch. That homo. :( I don't really like the way he judges Nuuba, when he hasn't never even spoken to her. lol.. Well, whatever. It's a good thing he didn't call her a slut or a whore, as you taught me, those are easy, bitch is not. :)

    Ana's about to deliver.... whooh, I hope by the way you'll be able to finish this rocky story before your moment! <3 Which is going to be? please don't make Matty-cakes die and then Ana would name the boy as Matt Sanders. that would be just so... not good. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE? You're never been the one for cliche fluffy story-endings! I've read that cliche in Harry potter fan fictions like 10000 times and every time it stays just as bad. don't do it honey!

    Yay, Brian loves Nuuba in his euphoric, maniactic(spelling?!?!?!) and killer-psycho mood!!!!!! this is a day that needs to be celebrated indeed.

    And just for you know, I do wear clothes. In Finland. Can't promise that in hot wheaters. 8)
    April 27th, 2009 at 06:01pm
  • rockcitynosebleed

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    I shed a few tears while reading this... Can you please make Matt survive somehow? Zacky and Johnny could come check on him, since he hasn't come back in a while, and then they call an ambulance, and the doctors save him? Cause I'd much rather see Brian die at the moment. He pisse me off. Seriously.
    April 27th, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • D. Dixon

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    aww, no!!
    that can't happen!
    matt can't be dead!
    he's gotta live!
    :'(
    i loved the update.
    more soon
    April 27th, 2009 at 03:32pm