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  • suicidelover11:02

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    more plz Yeya!! I like this story....I have not a clue where it's going or where it's going to end up...but I would rele like another update...so that I know haha....but more soon plz! ~Sarah~
    July 5th, 2007 at 04:35pm
  • Carlyumz

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    Wow i love the way Gee changes so quickly in the story and how you can write him evily and vulnerable both so well, i loved the way he keeps slipping into vulnerability, it's awesome!
    I loved especially:
    "Gerard sitting in the back with Frank Iero. They were talking and Gerard was actually smiling"
    YAY FRANKIE :D, he likes him a bit! or is that just my frankie-infested mind getting the better of me!

    With that feeling clogging his thoughts, Gerard leaned over to Mikey’s face, gently pressed his lips to his brother’s cheek and whispered in the softest, more sincere voice he had ever spoken in, “I love you.”

    That made me let out a big fat 'aww', it was such a tender moment, i loved it :D
    July 5th, 2007 at 11:46am
  • SNATCHLIPS

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    fantastic update!! this story is really really really good!!
    more sooon???
    July 5th, 2007 at 11:01am
  • I Am Death

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    OMG! Don't kill your story! Expecially with a gun or a germy, rage-virus-infected toilet brush!!! I love it! Poor Gee...and Mikey's rib's gonna cain! More! Please?
    July 5th, 2007 at 11:00am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I love this story - it's great!!
    I'm really glad that Gee's overcoming his thing... and letting Mikey and Frank in. You keep a balance of evil Gee (with Samantha) and Gee that needs to be mothered and looked after (panic attack Gee). It's awesome how talented you are to keep it up, and to keep it coming naturally chapter after chapter.
    Keep it coming.
    July 5th, 2007 at 10:30am
  • king.

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    ^^ Probably not.
    But I actually don't know.
    I'm kind of stuck on this story.
    Anybody have any ideas?
    July 5th, 2007 at 07:36am
  • Bellatrix Lestrange.

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    haha, i felt so bad for samantha and mikey.
    is gerard gonna stop being such a bitch now? ahah
    July 5th, 2007 at 07:31am
  • king.

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    ^^^ Aww, why... thank you!

    HEY! Your signature is pretty awesome.
    July 4th, 2007 at 03:20am
  • xander Crews.

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    gosh, this is amazing. and it just keeps getting better. =)
    July 4th, 2007 at 01:23am
  • king.

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    and the end was awesome...i don't know why...but for some reason i read what he said and it was like 'fuck yeah! My Chemical Romance!'...
    I hoped it would have that effect. YAY! I'm kind of having Writer's Block with this... Anyone have any ideas as to what I should write about?
    July 3rd, 2007 at 02:19am
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    aw, frankie...
    gerard scared him
    i loved it
    and the end was awesome...i don't know why...but for some reason i read what he said and it was like 'fuck yeah! My Chemical Romance!'...

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    July 2nd, 2007 at 05:51pm
  • Whistly

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    Wow, awesome chapter!
    More soon?
    July 1st, 2007 at 11:21pm
  • impure0purest

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    yay!!!
    Frank!!!!
    WEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
    best update ever!!
    more soon please :D
    July 1st, 2007 at 07:00pm
  • Carlyumz

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    yay FRANKIE :D
    I suspect that frankie likes gerard, desite everything, which makes me smile alot.
    Said it before but i love this!!
    July 1st, 2007 at 01:15pm
  • I Am Death

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    Yay! An update!...Gerard can be so cruel! That was hell funny though! Loved it!
    July 1st, 2007 at 12:39pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I love this... it's so good. I love the way it's so real, too.
    Keep it coming, I love it!!
    July 1st, 2007 at 11:53am
  • Bellatrix Lestrange.

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    haha i love how gerard acts.
    poor frank, though
    July 1st, 2007 at 03:54am
  • suicidelover11:02

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    Are you going to make this a ferard? (that would be nice) but even if you didn't, I like it. I want Matt gone though...bring on the Bob!! =D love him.....and Frankie needs to get in there too...haha then there will be the wonderful My Chemical Romance that we know and love...haha but more soon plz! *hug*
    July 1st, 2007 at 03:27am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I love the way Gee changes when Granny turns up, it's so cute!!
    Keep this coming, I love it.
    June 30th, 2007 at 10:16am
  • king.

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    Ooooh!
    One more comment until we reach 100.
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    gee's mood swings are funny
    Heh heh... I know the last insult was weak. But Gerard is recovering... you'll see a bit of major bitch in the next chapter. Which I'm almost done typing, I promise.
    June 29th, 2007 at 11:47pm