November 25th, 2007 at 05:14am
Thanks.There's more, I'm just having difficulty with it right now.
I'm think I'm going to have to go back and rewrite. I'm unhappy with this, and it's one of my favorite works.
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Thanks.
There's more, I'm just having difficulty with it right now.
I'm think I'm going to have to go back and rewrite. I'm unhappy with this, and it's one of my favorite works.
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I noticed this hasn't been commented on in over a month....there's more right?
I absolutely adore this story and how Gerard isn't the hero. In fact, quite the opposite. Actually, now that i think about it, most of the members have different personalities than imagined.
I love this story. It's bloody brilliant.November 6th, 2007 at 06:19am -
ah i just picked up on reading this again.
it's so good!
hahaha i'm just wondering, is kat gonna come back?September 2nd, 2007 at 04:57am -
wow-ee!
I apologise once again for not commenting recently you deserve so much more recognition for your writing and deserve regular comments in return, i've only just read the two most recent chapters and god alot can happen in a short time!
That twist was gorgeous, bringing frank into it like that, completely genious i also liked the way Frank seemed to accept it very quickly almost as if he was pleased about it.
But now i'm conflicted, as despite not loving waycest your writing and The Way's writing have made me much more open to it and even start to enjoy it. The way you've developed Mikey's character and the love that both of them share for eachother made me so empathetic towards them, i really wanted them to work to be honest, so i'm torn between my love of frerard and frankie and my new-found love of mikey.
See what you've done to me! :D
Bravo on two fantastic new chapters, brilliant twists, the end of the last chapter was superb especially about the weight being lifted from Mikey. I still adore this :)September 2nd, 2007 at 01:03am -
writer's block - shmiters block.
you did fine. (= i was waiting for you to update and i'm happy you did.
wow so...gerard and mikey are over. frank is STILL probably so confused, haha.September 1st, 2007 at 10:22am -
When I saw I had comments I was all like
=O
And more when I get the chance... This was really kind of a filler.
Sorry.
I'll try to be better.September 1st, 2007 at 08:39am -
yay, i miss this story :]]
at least it was a good break up :D
more soon?
<333333333September 1st, 2007 at 08:18am -
wow great updateSeptember 1st, 2007 at 08:05am
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Wow, Tainted... you're ava is gorgeous.
Sorry for all the wait, guys... I've got a severe case of Writer's fucking Block.August 28th, 2007 at 02:05am -
I really love this story. The way everything is so vividly told makes it easier to understand and comprehend.
You've done a very great job with this. :mrgreen: //</3August 20th, 2007 at 08:05am -
4 comments.
25+ subscribers...
Thanks to those who do comment.August 16th, 2007 at 09:58am -
wow this seems almost lifelike keep it goingAugust 16th, 2007 at 09:54am
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aw, poor mikey
frankie and jepha would be cute
gee needs to make up to mikey, 'cause he's been a bad man
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woot. i was looking out for this. (:
poor frank must be like ??? and jeph..woo
jeph likes him, doesn't he? and frank likes jeph. i've got a picture of them
on my profile...always thought they looked cute together. haha.
<33August 13th, 2007 at 02:16am -
yay! you updated <33
this is getting better and better.
Sooo, I'm guessing Jepha has a thing for Frank?
and Frank has a thing for Jepha and Gerard?
so much drama! lol
More soon pleaseeeee
<33!August 12th, 2007 at 11:13pm -
I assure you, no comments left can be sucky.
Thanks everyone, for taking the time to leave your love for the story.
I'll try to get another update up soon, I promise. I just need to develop Bert's character a little more.
:hug:August 5th, 2007 at 01:39am -
Woah. What a eulogy.
But this... this really got me...
Something inside of Gerard snapped. He grabbed Mikey’s wounded arm and wrenched it way behind Mikey’s head, twisting it as he did. With his other arm, he grabbed Mikey’s wrist and bent it far back, unleashing a sickening crunch. Mikey let out a howl of pain and tried to beat Gerard off with his other arm, but too lost in causing Mikey as much pain as possible, Gerard leaned close to Mikey, breaking fingers by bending them as far as they would go and whispering: “You’re the monster, trying to take over my life. Just because we’ve fucked a bit doesn’t mean anything. You’re still as much as the whore you were before I decided to grace your fucking mouth with my dick. You’re pathetic, Mikes. So pathetic and desperate enough to think that I could ever love someon-thing-something like you. You’re nothing, baby brother. Nothing. And you never will be.”
That baby brother added the final STING. I'm in a sucky comment mode again, so sorry for that... but I still love this. Know and remember that I really do.July 28th, 2007 at 05:24pm -
Nothing wrong with long chapters! =D Loved the update! Poor Mikey! Silly Gerard, doing that to him...July 27th, 2007 at 08:46pm
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You all just made me squeal.
In happiness. I LOVE YOU ALL!- Demonic Angel:
- Later in the story you should so have Mikey kick his head in
Don't worry... Mikey will get his revenge.
<<Mikey
<< Gerard.
Thanks for all the comments, guys. I really, really, really appreciate it.July 27th, 2007 at 03:52am
But I love it. =]
One thing that kind of irks me though is how from chaptet to chapter, months pass, and it's like, constant skipping. And then you kind of have to figure out that time passed by reading the chapter.