Disorder - Comments

Just began reading. Just finished chap 12. So this will be quick for I must read the rest.

Love the characterization - Gerard is exactly what I think he'd be pre-MCR, with a less charismatic personality. The rest were good too - they didn't fade into the background like in most stories.

Narration and description were good and well-written; don't have any crit for them. Fantastic, really.

The part with 9/11 was very incredible; I felt like I transported back in time and saw it happening. The emotions, the deaths, the collapsing towers... I got chills. I think you're brave for doing that, and you took a risk, since it's such a touchy subject and people almost never write about it in MCR fics.

Btw, the chap that ended with 'we are my chemical romance!' made me grin broadly. The birth of my fave band. :D

And the end of chap 12. The Way-brothers moment. Everyone must know by now that I am the ultimate Way-brothers fan, from pics to fics and moments.

So, yeah. Gonna keep on reading!

incest is best!!! nothing sus

Okay, someone is just spamming now.
*glares at Abby*
Regardless, thank you everyone for the legitimate comments. I'm having a bit of Writer's Block with the oncoming chapter, but I always do. I just need me some grape juice, a Fruit Roll Up and you will have yourselves a new chapter.

If it is your wish, you may take another virginity of mine ;)

^^^AWWWW, thank you, Abby.
I'm so happy to have your Cliché Catastrophe virginity!
*sobs*

I'm loosing my Cliche Catastrophe virginity to you.
Be honored.
ILY!!!11!
[abby]

^^So you told me.
Is Frank going to come in wearing his awesome glasses?
Once again, thanks everyone for leaving comments and showing me support. These comments are what keeps me fueled and eager to write more.
*hugs*

Yes! The Waycest! Finally!
You are a wonderous author. Truly. And I'm not being a 'kiss-ass' because you are my friend.
This story is fan-fucking-tastic! It made me want to roll around on my hardwood floor many a time.
Great great job!
xoxo
[abby]

freaking amazing.
that whole 'give 'em hell kid' chapter i was like WHAT!

Yes, you got some Waycest.
I hope I didn't lose any readers because of that move.
But I think there will still be a little teasing going on...
Thank you everybody, for comments. It means the world to see that my effort is being read and/or appreciated.

aww, what ^^she said is true
this is probably the cutest waycest on here
i love how gerard was vulnerable like that
it shows he really cares about mikey
...i knew you were gonna tease us...and we got waycest in the end

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I think this might just be the cutest waycest on here.
keep this coming, i love it.

WAYCEST? *buries head under pillow*, unfortunately i can't bring myself to read this pairing, i'm being honest, i love your story, the way you write and the way you've developed the pairings, i also liked the way you linked it with real songs as they could actually be related to those people very realistically.

But i don't like brother-on-brother action unfortunately, however the way you wrote this chapter, with gerard actually showing vulnerbility and the way you showed both of their thoughts was excellent. I liked the way you wrote them together, as so close to eachother, the way you showed their love for eachother was excellent.
So i will continue to read this, bearing in mind that i have some issues with the pairings because i love the story so damn much and need to see how it ends.

So making me read waycest is a hell of a compliment and shows how good a writer you are!

WOO!!! Waycest....Yeya is the writing God! I was thinking there was going to be Ferard...but I'm alright with Waycest...I wonder how long it will last though...never mind me though...more soon plz!! Love you my talented writing lil sista

aw, really cute.

Aww that was so sweet!
Please don't kill this story it doesn't suck!! Really it doesn't!
More soon?

^^^Awww, thank you.
I am vurry flattered.
Like I said... I dunno about FRERARD.
Another as equally beloved pairing, however...
*cough*
Thanks everyone for commenting!
I really appreciate it and I hope I have the next update completeld for you soon.

ooh, frerard?
meh i won't get my hopes up
'cause our insanely good author likes to tease us
...
poor gee
and poor mikey's ribcage!

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La la la...
I dunno about Frerard.
*cough*

never_let_me_go_:

Are you going to make this a ferard? (that would be nice) but even if you didn't, I like it. I want Matt gone though...bring on the Bob!! =D love him.....and Frankie needs to get in there too...haha then there will be the wonderful My Chemical Romance that we know and love...haha but more soon plz! *hug*

OMG is it gonna be a ferard?
Tha's be cool but if Gee finds a girl that'd be cool too...

Continue the story please??