The Hunger In My Heart - Comments

You cease to amaze me, please tell me you know that?
That was one of my favourite chapters of this story I think.
I love how Frank's just trying to come to terms with Gerard and Maria's relationship, just so he can make Gerard happy, but that Gerard still wants Frank, that the only restraint is that he thinks he's bad or wrong for Frank, when frankly, they're perfect for each other =D
And the story behind the reason for the shell, just made me smile. I could imagine him saying that, if Frerard was true.
Amazing writing. As usual ;]

Awe. I really love this story.
Please update. :)

GAH I'M GONNA FREAKIN CRY!!!!!!!!!
GerardGerardGERARD!!!
Is he truly, truly not going to be back with Frank????
I am gonna FREAK OUT!! if he doesn't....=(
Frankie needs Gerard!! Maria can get along without them, and Gee still loves Frankie to pieces....
AHA! I HAVE A THEORY!!
It came up when I thought about Maria XD
Okay, so everything's going to go as planned, Frankie's gonna pretend to be over Gee, Gerard's gonna spend lots of time with Frankie, and they're gonna plan the perfect wedding and everything, and it'll be peachy-keen--up until the actual wedding date. Then--Gee's gonna realize how much he loves Frankie and misses him and will say sorry to Maria and that he has to be with Frank =)
PLEASE TELL ME THAT'S GONNA BE THE CASE!!
'Cause I'm really REALLY gonna cry! But I truly love this story anyway, and I was freaking out when I saw an update so soon!!! =D

I deffinitely loved "Starving For His Touch", but I can honestly say I love this story even more xD Can´t wait for the next update :D

The update was purely gorgeous.
It made me feel so sad .. the thought of them both moving on from each other in this story is .. shocking! :o
I know they won't be able to fully move on .. they won't be able to resist each other at some point ... at least, I hope so.
I can't wait for another update of this beautiful story.
Write some more whenever you can.
:hug: :arms:

Oh my G
that was so sweet, the shell part.
:)
I love you for updating

awesome update =]
i just can't believe that Gerard is really in love with Maria...
i am still so convinced that he is in denial about his love for Frank.
i think he believes it's his fault Frank has this eatting disorder, and he thinks he's bad for him, so he won't let himself be with him.
i think it might just take Frank trying to move on with another man for Gerard to realize that Frank is the one he wants and needs.

more soon! <3

Awww. Gerard's reason for giving Frank the shell is so cute.

I'm glad they're talking, and now they'll go get pizza, and hopefully Gee will see Frank actually eat. Also, the fact that Gerard still isn't sure if he could handle Frank moving on, and Frank doesn't believe he will be able to, gives me hope. :roll:

There were a couple mistakes, mostly just a couple spots where you forgot to add the last " after someone was done talking.

And, this is just a suggestion, but maybe if you made their thoughts italic, or added ' before and after them, that might help, because sometimes it's confusing when it kind of changes POV.

But yeah, I really love this story. :D

=(
It's so heartbreakingly sad!!
Yea it's amazing and wonderfully written ..
But it's soooo damn sad!
Will it get happy again .. or well, at all?

Update Soon Please!

fucking hell I love this! it's so different from all the other stories I've read, and the storyline is just awesome. the only criticism I can think of is that you could update more often ;D

so yeah, can't wait for more! :D the whole thing is so amazing.

Hello There :)
I'm Sorry I Don't Comment Much But Its Cause I'm Usually Mutlitasking Whilst Reading Updates And Forget. Apologises Profusely Because This Is Just Such An Amazingly Written Sequel. The First Was Really Really Well Written And I Think You've Just Gotten Better And Better. Your Vocab Is Like Woah! Making The Descriptions Amazing! And I Just Love The Whole Plot, I Can Honestly Say I Love This Story. I'm All Like YESSSS When I Get The Update ^.^
I Can't Wait For More (:
Pfft
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<3

amazingness :D

=( Poor Frank... Stupid Gerard... I have no idea where this story is going, and I love it =D

Howeverrrr, there were several typos and grammatical errors in there.. small, but errors none the less. :cute:

Love this story, keep it up! I especially loved the idea of the shell... it made me feel all gooey and sad.
Can't wait for more =D :arms:

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i just wanna tell frank 2 screw gerard n look 4 another guy so that he doesn't hv 2 suffer anymore..*sob*

I really really hope Gerard comes to his senses and doesn't marry Maria. Seriously, just thinking about it makes me mad, sad, and maybe even a little sick. I still think she's a back stabbing harlot. I really really don't like her. At all.

I just read all of this, without stopping.
and I have been in tears the entire time I have been reading this sequel.
I don't know whether to love Gerard, or hate his guts.
It's so obvious he cares, but he has destroyed Frankie.
It is SO hard to make me cry, and you my friend, have done that.

NOOO!! WHAT??
They're supposed to be TOGETHER FOREVER, man!!!
That can't happen if Gerard's being all gahhhish and won't admit it!!!
D=
This is still a Frerard, right?????
I hope so...
Though, you've got me so hooked that I"monna keep on reading anyway =)

If Gerard doesn't love her as much as Frank, why can't he realise what's REALLY best for both of them, and go back to Frank!?
Poor Frank... I feel so, so bad for him.

Great update though, this is such an awesome story, even though it makes me wanna cry at the moment :XD

Can't wait for more!

So, I have nothing specific to say about this right now, but I do really, really like it so far.

But, I wanted to let you know, that I just went back and re-read Starving For His Touch, and it's truly amazing how much your writing has improved. I mean, not that it was bad, by any means, for the first one, but I feel like this one is more mature or something. I really love it. There are less mistakes in spelling and grammar, and the description just seems to be.. umm, I don't know how to say it. :roll: I guess it's easier to understand, maybe? I don't know, but I also think the third person point of view is giving it a bit of a deeper feel to it? I'm not sure. But I wanted to let you know that there's really a big difference. A good one. :D

poor frankie & welcome back