Wowww. AMAZING story. I love your writing style - and especially the chapter with Alex's description of his time in the hospital and all your music/pop culture references. Dani is so believable and puts all the young adult books in the world to shame on that account. Now I can't wait to read your other stories!
I'm glad the play got thrown in there. That seemed like so much fun. I have a friend in theater and she is crazy, so I can just imagine what the after-party was like.
Can you get this published, please? I don't want to have to go back through every chapter and save it to my computer, but I will if I have to, because I know I will want to read this again.
While I was reading the chapter, I was getting confused. Not in the contents of it, but I really thought the sory was going to end! It kind of scared me. xP I really loved the last sentence. I can't believe it's ending soon!! I'm loving how she's so real =D
This one's my favourite. She's real and hopeful and dynamic and honest. Thank you so much for writing this! Have you thought about getting published? I would buy this.
Both good questions, although i don't have an answer to either. Here's another one: Why do the people at the food court at the mall shove free samples into your mouth? Or has that only happened to me, cuz it was wieeeeeerrrrrrdddd!!
Wow... the breakdown.. was nice. =] Not nice for her, but it was written nicely. xD And me and my friends were JUST discussing why Hot Topic is selling the Justin Beaver (whatever his name is) dude's merchandise on facebook... xD They want Disney fans to go into HT for more money. Same thing with Hollister except the other way around. xD
I totally loved the whole "never"paragraph and how you totally listed all those stereotypes in high school. I just really loved it. Maybe because I realized I don't have to deal with high school anymore. xD And I also loved Alex's voice mail thingy. =D