If you were just BSing it, then you really know how to.
This chapter was just so great. I love this story so much, pretty much the only original I've ever liked. I love how Dani is just... ya know, a normal girl, but she is more, much more, than that at the same time. Idk, she's just a great character. Good work :D
I agree that Dani should go to Alex and make him choose between the two. I'm guessing that he'll choose Delia because this story seems like it would have a not so happy ending, although the chance of him choosing Dani is all the same. Fifty fitty. Dang. Sounds very stress inducing.
This chapter has actually inspired me to make a descision in my life. Thank you.
I could tell he was trying as hard as he could to trim the hurt from his voice like you'd try to cut off the itchy label on a shirt, but a tiny bit of that label would still be there, caught in the threads, and you couldn't get it out unless you wanted a hole in your shirt.