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  • music4life_life4all

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    wow! i have been reading this story for a few days/week and i'm glad i've finally made it through! but now i'm at the end and i want more! so please update! this is fantastic! i feel like i'm reading poetry! I'm tempted to suggest this to my english teacher. I'm so happy that there is finally a brilliant story on mibba. Never take it away =D
    April 30th, 2010 at 08:07am
  • CarterLynn

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    Oh my god I LOOOOVVVVEEE this story!!
    April 30th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • Up up away

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    CH. 4 is not pointless! I love the narration! So cute and antagonistic at the same time.
    April 29th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    That girl came out of nowhere! Just randomly came up and helped her with the books. It would be crazy weird if that was Delia. xD
    April 28th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • BeautifulAbomination

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    I am eating my second bag of chips in three days, so I am feeling fat. Also, I should be studying for my HR exam, which is tomorrow morning, but instead I am writing, playing facebook games like a nerd, and reading stories.
    Summary: I'm good, and you?
    April 24th, 2010 at 02:05am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    So you want to know how I am? Well, I had a intensely bad day until I played my violin after school and found out that there's a new chapter to your story. And I love the Tiger Woods allusion and the musical chairs and... well, I just love the whole list. xD
    April 23rd, 2010 at 04:53am
  • Riley;Grace

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    i love how i can really get how the character feels in this story though i myself have never been in love love. its interessting. i want you to write more!
    April 22nd, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • Riley;Grace

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    i love how i can really get how the character feels in this story though i myself have never been in love love. its interessting. i want you to write more!
    April 22nd, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    For some reason, I really loved this chapter. Maybe because of how she was saying interesting about love. Or maybe about how he doesn't want to change his faults. I don't exactly know but I really love this chapter. =]
    April 17th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • BeautifulAbomination

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    You need to get published asap. You've got great character development, and a way with words that just blows me away. It's real and tangible emotion. Everything that is said is beyond convincing, unlike other amateur authors who sound like they're trying to convince themselves that's the way it happened. I feel in the moment and like I'm experiencing everything along with the characters.
    Seriously! Published!
    April 17th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • Riley;Grace

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    i stayed up till 4 in the morning to read this story and i dont regret it one bit cause its just that fuggin epic. its...real? idk how to put it but i like it. and i have a 4 hour drive to take tomorrow. at 8 in the morning. and i love this story. lol. UPDATE!!!! xD
    April 16th, 2010 at 10:05am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    That really sucks how she was just being used. Come to think of it, that seems really familiar.
    February 3rd, 2010 at 06:27am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    Opps... sorry i posted 3 times. i'm on my DSi internet thingy and it was spazzing. sorry
    January 6th, 2010 at 07:07am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I can't really believe she actually visited his mother. his mom must miss him =[ and I wasn't expecting the octopus garden.i was just singing it awhile ago. xD
    January 6th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    We finally know the truth about his mom! yay! That was really dramatic when she trief to kill herself with her scarf. Nice update! =D
    December 28th, 2009 at 08:34am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I'm still reading this story!!! xD I was really missing it. Great chapter by the way. =D
    December 25th, 2009 at 07:40pm
  • voldemort!

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    Ah, I hope everything works out between Dani and Alex! D:

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    You have no idea how much word-salads made my day. (:
    Your writing is so beautiful. I love it.
    October 25th, 2009 at 07:42am
  • LakeEffectKid

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    Excellent chapter. I liked the intro thing, like... the italics... yeah! The italics...

    So, can't wait for the next chapter!
    October 21st, 2009 at 03:16am
  • Taste

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    this is well
    October 20th, 2009 at 07:21am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    It didn't seem like you were bsing the chapter. It seems great. =]
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:22pm