OMG YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I missed this story like mad lol and i'd almost lost faith but im happy that i stuck it out and that it payed off. i kind of getting the feeling that the story is gonna end when they go t their respective Unis. Tell me im wrong....
^ I agree. I woke up early this morning, and decided to find a good story to read. I wasn't expecting to find something as mind-blowingly awesome as this. <-- I don't even know if that's a word, but this story is made of pure awesomeness. lol
I hope that you update this because I am dying to find out what happens next. I'm at a lost for words. This story is amazing. Okay, now that I'm done rambling and wasting your time. I shall go suscribe with hopes of you updating soon. :]
Oh my effin' God, I love this story. I just saw it randomly about an hour ago, and just finished reading all nineteen chapters. Seriously, you must finish this story or my life on Mibba will be uncomplete - forever and always.
Okay, now that I'm done with that, I want to say that I was being serious when I said I love your story. Chase is just about the cutest boy ever, and I'm not saying that because he's gay. I like Brad, too, and I am so curious about where their 'relationship' is going.
Simply amazing!
Also, I love how you change the characters. For example, take Brad's mother. In the last chapter, she actually sounded like a mother. Not like I could hear her or anything, but I could certainly imagine that scene being played in my head.
I really hope you update. I don't care when. No pressure, seriously. I know how hard it is to keep up with stories, so yeah. Just wanted to let you know how much I adore this story.
OMG this update was AMAZINGGG!!! I love how passionate Bradshaw is.... you know.. without showing it... : ]]] Can't wait until you have time to post moreeee!!! : ]]]]
You are SO COMPLETELY FORGIVEN! I miss your updates so much! I wonder about Taylor obsession, though.... Hmm... I wait with baited breath for the next installment in the epic drama of this story! *Facepalm* Must stop reading old Breaking Dawn ads..
YEAY!!! YOU HAVE [semi] RETURNED!!!! i was sad, cuz this was my favorite story!! i thought youd left poor Chase and Bradshaw to simply reside in our minds!! THANK YOU!!! awesome update!! CLIFFY!!!
Yeah, so this comment is long overdue and will probably suck since I'm kinda tipsy and I'm going out in a minute so... yeah. xD
Your dialogue is always so realistic. It's ... argh, impossible to explain, but it's just the conversation in this story is always so true to life, and that takes skill.
Oh wowee, the story's getting so sinister. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I reall get the feeling that they're doomed. I probably say this every freakin' chapter, but the sense of foreboding gets stronger with each time. Arglkmjnshhh. D:
You kicked ass at creating this really nasty, chilling atmosphere. The whole feeling of darkness and cold, the moonlight, the cold bathtub, Chase's fear... incredible. It gave me chills.
"Bradshaw?" My eyes asked the question I didn't speak. "I'm in love with you and I don't want to do anything to upset you." He pressed his body to mine. "I'm sorry."
There was just something so painful about that line.
But I'm glad they made love rather than fucked. :]
AND, HEY. BRAD. YOU'RE TURNING INTO A TRAILER-PARK HUSBAND. STOP THAT.