In Too Deep - Comments

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.
I love love love loved the update.
You are the most awesomest writer ever! You get freaking ten stars!!!!
I am so sad the story is over, though. What if I cry?

omg..i'm seriously tearing right now...today me and my friends were talking about our future and stuff and how we always wanna stay together and we all silently knew that it prolly wasnt gonna happen cos we all have different career choices and i'm trying too forget about all that sad stuff...thenn i read this....

but on a plus its AMAZING!!!!!! you should make a triquel...is that what its called?? but like ten years later after they graduate college or whatever and there 'settled'!!!

WHERE IS MY UPDATE.
WHERE?!!?!

epilogue epilogue epilogue epilogue!!!!!!!!! o hdear god let there be an epilogue!!!! Im so sad for ths story to end!!!!!! It iz amazing!!!!!!!!

*sniffles* The next chapter is the last? This has been such a good story that I don't want it to end.

But anyways, Max needs to let go of his parents. I know that can be sorta hard to do, but if they obviously don't care about him then why should he care about them? And I still think he and or Jackie need to do something special on stage for the other :D

OMG! getting sick must have TOTALLY sucked! I hate being sick. Plus i'm a huge germaphobe, so it doesn't help much. But here in little ol' virginia, the flu is just starting to go around, so it's only a matter of time until i catch it.

BUt great update! Seeing the story go bye-bye is gonna be really sad!!

Haha this story always gets updated when I'm at my friend's house and I see it and then can't wait to get home to read it lol.
It's going to be sad when this finishes though because it's seriously amazing.
Good luck with writing the end and I hope you feel better soon

xx

LOVE IT!!!!
Oh my god, I will be so sad when this ends.
Great update, as always, and i hope you're feeling better :)

xx

I love this story and if/when it ends im going to cry for a week.

because its AMAZING

OMG I loved the update! I love the story! I love you in all your writing awesomeness. I am super sad it is fixing to end. Argh.

And apparently now I have a second comment that I'm editing so the same thing doesn't appear 2x. My Mibba's messed up tonight.

GAH! I commented, but then something went wrong and my page didn't load, and then my comment disappeared! GRR! Anyways, the gist of it was that I liked the updates I read, a comment that Max and Jackie are gonna need to find another way to see each other (study period anyone?), and that Max should do something special for Jackie onstage at Graduation.

yay im so excited for max jackie, they get to do what they've always wanted :D
...but its just sad that they'll be apart from each other and why the hell do they always fall asleep in class??...i stay up till like 1am wake up at 6:30am and still have enough energy to that again and again...even on school days!!!!!!......well whatever update soon please ;)

happy late bday lolz

zomg...that was sad, but very good.

update soon!!

WWWWHHHHHHAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTT?! The end?! It can't be the end! I forbid it! I look forward to these updates! Sometimes it's the only thing that gets me up in the morning (if i don't go to school, no internet, in turn no reading story!)

I am going to miss Jackie and Max sooo much! *cries* Ugh. What are you going to do after this? What will you write?

And, btw, I think you should get this story edited a bit, and take some parts out, combine the two stories together, and get it published :) I would buy it, even though i've already read it lol. You should see if you can find a n editor for you! Lolz.

ahhh I love this story too much for it to end! I'm glad you liked writing writing it though coz I know we all loved reading it.
Oh well, can't wait to see how it ends XD

xx

I.
Love.
This.
Story.
With.
Every.
Fibre.
Of.
My.
Being.

xx

Stunning!

I really loved the last updated, even though it was sad. :-( I don't want it to be the end of Jackie and Max!

Do you think you'll do another sequel after this, or move on to bigger things?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
man i don't want this to end!!!

aww man!
haha, i guess i'll just read it over and over again
lmao [:
man i'm all sad now
but i loved the update
and can't wait for more!

This is great. Honestly, I love it.
I stayed up really late on a school night just to read more.
Please update soon.