Comment on the Story Layout

I like it. To be honest, I think the radius looks a little off if the banner has square corners and the bottom of the content is slightly rounded, but it's only small. Also, I think it'd add the look if you put a border; something like a shade, that's differs from the rest of the colour scheme.

Silent Killer. (I like the white line in the border background, tbh)

The white line to me is odd, but if you like it then it's just fine. Other than that, it's aboslutely beautiful, the colors match perfectly and I love it.

The Greatest Family in Britain

The only thing I can criticize is the tiny font is stressing for my horrible eyesight, but yeah, besides the fact that I'm nearly blind and can't read unless the font is BAZOOOW, see above gif

Heading West.

Font is hard to read due to too much contrast in colors, the lack of a distinct content box irks me, and I feel like the 'banner' type picture should be up much more. Summary font also bugs me because it's even harder to read. I do like the chapter title space, though.

The Hunter's Trill.

Eight. It's very dark. I mean, there's nothing wrong with that, but, I think, after a while, the black font on the gray background could cause stress to the eyes. Other than that, I really like it. I like how it all seems to just work, like all the colors are gray, but they look magnificent together.

And She Smiles

Apparently it's not here anymore, sorry

In Retrospect.

Ten. It's gorgeous, and I love how simple it is. The colour scheme is beautiful and well pulled off, and the font is easily read.

We're Nothing But Trouble

I don't think it's a bad layout, in fact I like layouts that have lightened versions of the same pattern. I feel like that's a good place to put the text (the lighter pattern). I think though that the gif and the overall background of the layout itself don't compliment each other. Maybe if the lighter part of the layout had more colors like the ones in the gif, it would fit a little bit better.

Landslide

The banner is pretty but simple and I like the starry background. I think the mood/vibe of the layout itself is quite cool although if I had any criticism, it'd be the size of the font (but only because I'm blind ). I really like the thin white border around the banner, it's really pretty!

Iridescent (I've been fiddling with this for a while and I'm unsure on it, so any comment would be great)

I love it. It's so simple and minimal and it's gorgeous. The colour scheme is easy on my eyes and I love the alignment on the summary. What about 43?

I don't think the picture quite fits in with the border nor background, but I do like the setup of the text / subtitle & background. The rainbow colours are pretty but the picture is too yellow for me.

The Town of Radley

I feel like the banner overpowers the rest of the layout, as it's quite a bit darker. Aside from that, I like it a lot.
Invent the Universe.

Gorgeous. I love how the colour of the border fits perfectly with the layout and the banner. It's quite striking. I also love the banner, and the white dashes in the circular motion - idk, it looks pretty cool. Me likey

Iridescent

I really like it. I think it all goes together well and I love how everything matches something. The text is a tad big but that's never been a problem for anyone, I think overall it's just beautiful. I wish I had more to say but it's pretty perfect.

Monolog

I love the simplicity and how it's all set up :)

Comfortable

It's absolutely gorgeous. Gives off sort of an ancient-Roman feel with the chalky whites and hints of red. And I really like the banner, it's perfectly smooth with the rest of the layout.

Invent the Universe.

I really like this. It took me by surprise a little bit, just because it looks so different from the layouts I usually see on Mibba, but I like it a lot! It's got a kind of futuristic vertigo feel. And I love the quote at the top. This is wonderful. I can't suggest anything to make this better.

When the Lights Go Out

It's gorgeous. I love the simplicity of it and certainly the background. I dislike round corners, though, just a personal preference. But really, minimalism is the key to my heart.

Aeviternal.

Absolutely gorgeous. The colour scheme is perfection and the story content font is a perfect size - not too small, not big either. I love the arrows as your youtube links!

Sunrise

I really liked the title and the bottom moon, sun, star thing. But once the side bar picture loaded you couldn't really see any of these things. I think it might be better just left on a white background or maybe with a border. :)

Aurora Woods