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    @ Katie Mosing
    Um, no.. Not that I can think of. XD Maybe just briefly mention how they ran into Liam too?

    And yes, I'm just waiting for it to come back from a beta!
    January 10th, 2016 at 12:34pm
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Awesome! I think I'll be all ready to write my chapter once yours is up then!

    Did we decide when (time wise and chapter wise) the big group is all going to meet at the mansion? And do they meet somewhere before the mansion and then all go there together, or is one group already at the mansion when the others show up?
    January 10th, 2016 at 07:48pm
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    @ Katie Mosing
    Sounds good! Very Happy

    No. I don't think we did. And I think Louis and Grace are trying to go to their family vacation place? I was thinking that maybe Louis's group gets there first and maybe stays there for a night or two but nothing, and when they're about to leave because a few zombies come they run into the other group! Wow And then maybe someone could be out scavenging or whatever and comes across the mansion about a chapter later?

    Shifty Or something like that. Haha!
    January 11th, 2016 at 07:23am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    That sounds good to me! What is their family vacation place? Like a lake house or something?
    January 11th, 2016 at 07:27am
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    @ Katie Mosing
    Yes, I was thinking a lake house, not like a rich looking one, but something cosy looking. I just need to figure out how it'll look like after the outbreak. Think

    And I also changed Phoebe's name for you!
    January 11th, 2016 at 07:31am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Have you ever watched Cabin in the Woods? I could imagine it looking something like that!

    Thank you!!
    January 11th, 2016 at 07:52am
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    Sorry it took me so long to get back, I just found my computer charger again!

    Ok so, let me see if I have everything right:

    - Juliet, Niall, and Harry have just left their last hideout and are on the run. Around chapter 4 they will get to scavenging around at a store and in chapter 5 they are fully introduced to Grace and Michael.
    - Eden's group meets Liam.
    - Eden's group decided to go looking for Louis' families lake house and at the same time, Grace convinces Juliet and Co. to also go looking for the same lake house.
    - The groups finally all meet up.

    I think it would be nice if Eden's group found the lake house first and when they noticed some zombies converging on them they get ready to run. While they're defending the place, they notice someone shooting the zombies down from outside (probably Niall and he has no idea anyone is in the lake house).

    After all the zombies are gone Niall introduces himself and promises to bring his group back and when he does that's when Grace and Louis are reunited.

    And then they stay their for maybe a week (three tops) before having to move locations.
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    I'm thinking of killing off Niall between the first hideout and the second, when they're on the move. Thoughts?
    January 12th, 2016 at 12:18am
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    @ jason todd.
    That's okay!

    The only thing I saw that you mixed up was Eden's group is with Liam already when the story starts, and they meet up with Zayn in my first chapter!

    I really like your idea for the lake house! That sounds great!

    So he'd die after they leave the lake house, on their way to the mansion? I think that's a good idea. That way the readers will really see that we mean business haha! Any ideas on how he'll die?
    January 12th, 2016 at 01:06am
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    @ Katie Mosing

    Yeah, he's dying in transit. I have this idea that he get's bitten by accident and has been hiding it and someone in the group has to shoot him. Any volunteers on who wants to shoot him?

    I thought about having Harry shoot him but I also want Harry to have to carry Juliet away from Niall's body.
    January 12th, 2016 at 01:33am
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    @ jason todd.

    Ahh, I love that!! Omg Zayn Crazy since he just met everyone and has the least amount of connection, he'd probably have the easiest time doing it. I think if Harry did it, Juliet would probably blame him in a way, even if he had no choice, so I'm not sure he'd really be able to comfort her.
    January 12th, 2016 at 01:53am
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    @ Katie Mosing

    Yay, so Zayn is the killer!

    And I think it might cause some problems between Zayn and Juliet so later on I will think Juliet should tell Zayn she doesn't blame him.
    January 12th, 2016 at 02:28am
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    @ jason todd.
    Zayn Vampire

    Oh yes, I love that! And I could see Eden trying to convince him that it wasn't his fault. Ooooh, maybe Juliet even tries to talk Eden into fixing Niall (because she knows she was a nursing student) because she's so desperate and weak in that moment (like if his arm gets bitten or leg, she tries to get her to cut it off), but Eden, Zayn and Harry all know that it won't work, so Harry has to carry Juliet away while she's crying and stuff Cry What do you think?
    January 12th, 2016 at 02:58am
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    @ Katie Mosing

    Yes! I have it planned out that Niall tells Juliet he loves her and that he's gonna miss her and then he tells Harry to take care of Juliet. By that point everyone is not having fun.

    Harry then carries Juliet away and she struggles until she hears the gun shot.
    January 12th, 2016 at 03:04am
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    @ jason todd.
    Ugh, that is going to be such a sad moment Cry It'll be like Juliet is trying to save him but Niall knows there is no hope so he says one last goodbye before Harry takes her away Cry
    January 12th, 2016 at 03:08am
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    @ Katie Mosing
    Now I'm sad guys.
    January 12th, 2016 at 03:19am
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    @ jason todd.
    This is going to be a sad story. Everyone will hate us.
    January 12th, 2016 at 03:27am
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    Whoops.
    January 12th, 2016 at 03:32am
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    @ Katie Mosing

    It's good. This is a good thing. I wanna make people cry. Twisted Evil
    Is Michael and Niall going to connect like planned before? Maybe for the little while? And that's why Michael wasn't among the first to volunteer to do the shooting? Because the way I'm making my two to be is like.. they're on the brink of losing their humanity. They just haven't yet because they got each other, and Louis. So yeah, Michael hasn't had a lot of friends growing up, that loner, so he wouldn't want to do it.

    I'M SAD
    WE'RE GONNA KILL OFF NIALL.

    Was it just going to be Grace, Michael and Niall that we're killing off? Another will probably come up later as we go.

    I also had this part in the first page:
    • The group will freak out when they notice a horde making their way to the mansion, and Louis, Niall and Michael would immediately take action before anyone. Although Louis is named leader, Niall and Michael are the "Daryl" in the group by not wanting to take charge, but they're fully able too.
    Should I change Niall to Zayn?
    January 12th, 2016 at 08:50am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    I totally forgot about that! But yes, Niall and Michael need to be friends.

    I think three people dying is a good place to start off at and if the need arises to kill anyone else then we'll decide then.
    January 12th, 2016 at 08:55am
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    @ jason todd.
    psst, I edited the post before I saw you reply. XD

    Omg, okay.. um, I don't think I'll kill of Grace until a there's a couple of chapters left in the story. I want her to be almost back to normal when she does.

    Do you want me to change/add anything to the first page?
    January 12th, 2016 at 09:01am