Original Superhero Co-Write

  • hibernus

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    @ starfire.
    The Undertakers. Or a more military name ...The Unit.
    February 18th, 2015 at 09:54am
  • eraserhead.

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    What about The Young and Divine or something like that?
    February 18th, 2015 at 09:58am
  • eraserhead.

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    OOOH I do like the undertakers.
    February 18th, 2015 at 09:59am
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    @ niklitera
    Most definitely! He can teach all he knows. Esther will be a sponge for knowledge!
    February 18th, 2015 at 10:03am
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    @ decay
    I like it! Just I decided to have Esther leave her home to escape a lifestyle she fears so maybe "An Amish girl who tossed and turned dreaming of making her escape." Or something alone the lines.
    February 18th, 2015 at 10:12am
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    @ parry otter.

    @ niklitera

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    @ hibernus
    Okay, I have the story page up and I added you guys. I am so disappointed in myself; usually my layout skills are way better. Facepalm I searched the Internet for like two hours and I cannot find a damn background that works. So, I apologize for the boringness. And yes, I was serious about a vague summary. Tomato but feel free to add more; I didn't want to go overboard and make it super long. I'll post the prologue too.
    February 18th, 2015 at 12:01pm
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    @ parry otter.

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    @ hibernus
    Okay, I have the story page up and I added you guys. I am so disappointed in myself; usually my layout skills are way better. Facepalm I searched the Internet for like two hours and I cannot find a damn background that works. So, I apologize for the boringness. And yes, I was serious about a vague summary. Tomato but feel free to add more; I didn't want to go overboard and make it super long. I'll post the prologue too.
    February 18th, 2015 at 12:01pm
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    We can also change the title later too, if need be. I just needed to put something in order to post it. Twitch
    February 18th, 2015 at 12:18pm
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    @ starfire.
    really? I actually really like the layout. especially the title gif!
    February 18th, 2015 at 12:40pm
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    @ parry otter.
    Oh good! I feel like a lot of my other layouts are so much more aesthetically pleasing and I was worried about this one. So, yay! Thank you. Cute Arms
    February 18th, 2015 at 12:49pm
  • niklitera

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    @ starfire.
    It's a great layout. Very well done, anyway, are going to start anytime? Cause I feel like should all be able to communicate better if it's really going to happen this soon. I need all yer skypes, mateys and please forget I just used pirate slang.
    February 18th, 2015 at 03:40pm
  • raja sahara

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    @ hibernus
    omg I love it! Maybe she can follow around Remy, you know, for romantic purposes Lick
    but I can also see her following around any one of them.

    @ niklitera
    okay I changed the things you all wanted me to change!

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    @ parry otter.
    I really like The Undertakers! That sounds great!

    But I also think it was a little too premature to post the prologue, since not everyone had accepted (like Sophia still isn't listed as an author probably because she's asleep or s/t) nor was there any final say about the summary or anything. I also thought I would do it, since I wrote it, but that's also not as important. Does anyone mind if I play around with a layout? We don't have to change it, just to give options...
    February 18th, 2015 at 03:57pm
  • raja sahara

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    Also, can we change the rating? I don't think this is NC-17. Maybe R?
    February 18th, 2015 at 03:59pm
  • squidward tentacles.

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    Whoops, I didn't even realize I had set it as NC-17. Bangin I did everything on my phone so I must've over-scrolled through the ratings. You guys can always go on and add more to the summary. Everyone wanted to see the story page and I can't make one without putting something in the summary section.
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:00pm
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    @ decay
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:01pm
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    Also if anyone wants to make the little character page thingies that'd be super great, if you guys want them for this story. :)
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:09pm
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    @ niklitera
    I probably will get started on it pretty soon; but I really just put up the prologue for the sake of having something there. It's a teaser. Naughty

    My skype username is ccherrington1.
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:13pm
  • raja sahara

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    @ starfire.
    do you mind if I change the layout just to see if anyone likes it...?

    I also made some changes to the summary, if you don't like, it you can change it back.
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:22pm
  • raja sahara

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    also sorry if I seemed rude earlier, I was just a little annoyed and it was also 7am and I hate accounting Facepalm

    I still luv u guys...Arms
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:31pm
  • raja sahara

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    Okay I changed it. Again, if you don't like it, you can change it!
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:35pm