Original Superhero Co-Write

@ decay
Wait did you already add to the summary? Cause I'm not seeing it.
Everyone seems okay with the layout but if you want to make a second one for us to choose from that's okay.
It's okaaaaay. Sorry if it seemed hostile take over-ish to put up the prologue I just wanted to have something to catch people's eye and also I'm just really really really excited for this story.

@ starfire.
I put it on already because I don't know how else to show you. And I just took off the lil design thing cause I don't think it fits the mood of the story............

Yeah, I was just annoyed that I wasn't the one to put it up but it's aight it doesn't matter really

I have been clicking the accept but to be a author for an hour and nothing is happening! I don't know what to do?

On a happier note, I like the layout.

Never mind! Apparently it accepted my, but the alert was still highlighted.

Mibba has been doing that to me for the last few days too.

Also guys is there such a thing as like a group message thing on skype,,?

That happened to me too! It bothered me so much cuz it literally wouldn't go away.

@ starfire.
yes there is!!!

@ decay

@ starfire.

@ niklitera

@ parry otter.
Oh i just made a Skype account. Never had one so bear with me. Its Kochlus.

@ decay
Omg show me hooow! Haha I sent you a request thingy on there and I already have Nik and Sophia. But I have no idea how to make it a group thing.

Okay I'm adding people to a group chat, so accept my requests yall! Also, what's Mel's Skype?

@ parry otter.
WHATS YO SKYPE

@ decay
I'M SORRY I WAS SLEEPING.

It's supposed to be flitterbloomfucker but I've had trouble with the connection. I'll see what I can do to fix that.

Also, I like the layout! I've liked both of them. Hahaha. I MIGHT play around with the prologue in a bit if that's okay. I'll post here before just putting it up, though

@ parry otter.
Feel free to edit anything you like.

@ parry otter.
I sent you a request!

okay, I didn't really just much, just wording in a few places. I'm sort of a synonym nazi in the way that I hate using the same words too close together.

Half the world was asleep as a storm rolled in over northeastern United States.

Five individuals lay in their beds, asleep. A solitary girl dreamt about slicing into cadavers for her class in the morning. A Cajun boy mumbled lines from a musical in his sleep. A gentle boy tossed and turned as images of a fire appeared in his mind. An Amish girl dreamt of her escape. And a lanky boy mindlessly scratched at an area where his leg used to be.

Rain pattered against their windows, gaining speed at every one minute interval. Thunder grew louder and louder until it was almost deafening. Lightning struck trees, cars, power lines, and anything else it could reach. It wasn't a normal storm. Not one meteorologist on the local news stations had predicted it days earlier, like with most superstorms. This one appeared with no warning and it seemed as though it had targets.

As these specific five people lay asleep, lightning struck their sleeping bodies. But it wasn't just them. Dozens of people all throughout the northeastern United States were struck by this lightning. It was peculiar, though; As the lightning shocked their bodies in a way that would've killed most people, they peacefully slept as though nothing had happened.

But something had happened, and it changed their lives forever.

@ parry otter.
Looks good to me

also, i added the character page but didn't add Jaxon or Naveen cause I didn't know what to write?

it's simple. you guys can change it if ya' want. c:

@ parry otter.

@ niklitera

@ decay

@ hibernus

Okay my fellow humans! I need some help here. All right, so my first chapter is going to begin with Annie's cadaver speaking to her. She spazzes and runs out of class. She's hauling ass out of there and then notices the hallway is suddenly empty and she gets like, rushed by a gazillion ghosts. Hence falling down the stairs like a dweeb. So she wakes up at the hospital and her parents are worried. I'm thinking she's near the ER or ICU and there are a few people who were injured severely in a car wreck and they're going to die soon. So Annie gets overwhelmed with this inner cold and just icky death feeling and she pukes her guts out and her mom insists she needs to stay overnight.

But there's ghosts and creepiness and she just wants to go home. So here is where I get stuck. Should the chapter end right about there, and the commotion with Esther start in my next chapter? With Esther going before Hollace and Annie being written again after I'm struggling a little with this time frame. So we do the Esther chapter and everything goes berserk. Then comes the Hollace chapter, so is it going to rewind from Esther's and be how he came to be in the hospital and then lead back up to the chaos? And then for Annie I have her seize the opportunity to get out of there and she's freaked cause of the ghosts and she hides from her mom, meets Remy and beau, decides to wait to leave because the hospital is full of panicked stampeding people? And when she first slips out of her room and takes off she passes Hollace and he can tell she's spooked, maybe he was even in the hall at school when she acted all crazy and recognizes her?

Also I'm thinking the initial awakening of their powers from the storm draws a ton of spirits to her. After a bit it'll taper off a little and she won't be bombarded all the time but at first it's just ghost central for her. With her ability to see and hear them and kind of move between the world of the living and the dead (which she can't do yet but she'll figure it out) the ghosts are drawn to her like a beacon. Some just want her help and others are malevolent and they know she can see them and can banish them (when she learns how) they don't like her. And when those kind show up they try to take her out. So expect some Insidious-esque moments.

Also I was thinking, maybe when it comes to the dead Beau can't get a grasp on her thoughts..? Like when they meet at the hospital and she's wigged out and Remy asks if she's all right and Beau's all "oh she's so not" maybe he can tell she's panicked but not why? Cause ghosts live sort of on another plane of existence and don't adhere to the same rules we do. So maybe if she's looking at or otherwise in the presence of ghosts he can still get her emotions but it short circuits his ability to read her thoughts clearly so he doesn't know exactly what she's seeing or hearing and wjen there are no ghosts around her he can hear her thoughts/see memories the same as he can with everyone else?