Oh my God. You're my hero- I've been writing this one story over and over- trying to make it Mibba worthy- and now that you've posted this- I think it's finally Mibba worthy. Thanks:]
June 7th, 2008 at 09:09am
I was gonna say that, but I didn't wanna get blasted.
- scoutfinch:
- Sometimes, the word 'said' is needed, in my opinion
Too much variation can make it seem like overload.
However it is nice to have a variety sometimes, so this list is helpful!
:cute:
- What's in a name?:
- I skip “said” a lot of times. And skip as not replacing it with any other word either. Like, I don’t tell at all how it’s said but rather add something the character does. Or I simply just put nothing after the things they say. Like:
“Yeah, I just got here,” she said, smiling.
“Okay. Cool.” The boy shuffled his feet, his eyes darting around nervously.
“So?”
“So,” he sighed like a worn-out parrot and tried to smile but it turned out as a grimace. He felt so stupid repeating her word but it was all he could get past his anxiously twitching lips.
Crappy example but it gets the message across, yeah?
Anyway, this way there’ll be even more variation. :cute:
Though having a list of alternative words for "said" is of course great. = ]
:XD
- Valo Ink.:
- I think I love you