Alternative Words for 'Said'

  • dr. faustus

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    It's amazing. Especially since you categorized them. Thanks!
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    August 9th, 2009 at 05:43am
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    This is so much help. 8D
    August 10th, 2009 at 07:46pm
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    This thread is amazing.
    It helps me so much.
    Thank you. :cute:
    August 11th, 2009 at 08:49pm
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    August 11th, 2009 at 11:39pm
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    Thank you so much for this! :arms:

    -Totally just printed it out- :tehe:
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:31am
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    Oh my god. I found this website a few weeks ago and then I lost the link.
    Thank you soo much for this; it's really helpful.
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:34am
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    This is actually fantastic.
    Thanks so much! :)
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:19pm
  • footprintsonmyheart

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    I'm going to add some of my own if you don't mind, in a new category.

    When somone talks in excess or too much:
    prattled
    blabbed
    rambled
    blathered
    babbled (this one can be used for nervousness too)
    August 18th, 2009 at 05:20am
  • Kilgharrah

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    The best part of dialog... Try and leave actions out of it, have only two people speaking at any time if possible... That way you only need two alternatives for "said", and then the reader can follow along by the way diaog is structured =)
    It's a cool little tip... Or if there's a niche to the way two people talk, you can have three talking at once... used to use that trick a lot myself.

    I usually just use simplistic ones, and stuff like "giggled, slapping him gently on the arm" and such to kind of break the dialog and keep it from droning on.
    August 18th, 2009 at 05:47am
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    Thank you!
    August 19th, 2009 at 11:56pm
  • nebulas

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    Whoa.
    Thanks for posting this.
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    August 20th, 2009 at 01:17am
  • violentine's day

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    You could explain what's going on instead...
    In example:

    He brushed aside his bangs, "I just don't know how to react."

    Lilly's voice was raspy from the tears, "We'll figure it out."

    Archie nodded, "I hope it doesn't take too long."
    August 22nd, 2009 at 07:53am
  • MyNameIsBob

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    When I was younger I had an English teacher I used to speak to alot and he and I would discuss my writing a lot.

    Well he gave me an exercise of writing a big story, never using the word said.

    And although this was a great exercise the word said should be used more than alternatives because other words can draw the attention away and the reader has a break.

    People when reading, skip over the word said and so it is a good word to use. They just scan it.

    But that doesn't mean you just use it. Putting in the odd alternative is a good idea but never abandon said as it is a very useful tool.
    October 18th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • cannibal.

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    I think this is helpful, yep I brought the thread back.
    March 8th, 2011 at 06:00am
  • DarkMystique

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    Oh, my days, thank you so much for posting this! :'D

    I go on forever trying to think of what to put instead of "said" all the time. XD You have saved me.
    April 8th, 2011 at 06:34pm
  • dontcallmepuddin!

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    This is very helpful!
    I know several synonyms for the word 'said', but whenever I'm writing my mind blanks out on me & I can never remember any other words.
    It's frustrating! Grr
    April 14th, 2011 at 09:27pm
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    Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! This is so fucking helpful! Arms
    April 25th, 2011 at 07:14am
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    THIS IS A FABULOUS THREAD
    September 4th, 2013 at 06:25am
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    this is so great i am fucking crying
    September 4th, 2013 at 08:01am
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    Thank you! This is excellent :)
    September 4th, 2013 at 07:35pm