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  • a depth of pure blue

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    uhm, i can do whatever i want, thanks.
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:22am
  • Lady.V.

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    How have u been? :-)
    October 27th, 2011 at 01:02am
  • cannibal.

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    Yeah in some cases. Not all. I had five cats; then I moved into my own house where pets weren't allowed.
    October 26th, 2011 at 01:11pm
  • cannibal.

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    Alright and no she didn't have a name.
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:56pm
  • cannibal.

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    True. I'd return the favor but I don't read stories on here. If after posting the rest of the chapters I get bored I'll take a look at your stories. I can't promise anything though; I'm pretty good with staying occupied.
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:49pm
  • cannibal.

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    Thank you for your comment and advice. I see you've been helping others as well. The story is actually an older one that I had posted on here last year. The chapters I'm currently typing up and posting are old ones. When I start writing the newer ones that follow I'll definitely look back and try use your advice to the best of my ability.
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:41pm
  • courtney_jane

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    Thank you for the story comment, and the feedback. :) Definitely going to take your advice. : )
    October 25th, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • noriko.

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    Thankyoui for the story comment ^_^
    And for the feedback :3
    We'll definately take your advice =]
    October 25th, 2011 at 10:08am
  • Fire!

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    Thankyou for the story comment and feedback.
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • lizziemcgenius

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    Thanks for attempting to help me, but I like the way I write and other people seem to like it, so I think I'll keep it the way it is.
    October 25th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • elandili

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    Thanks for the feedback.. But I like the way me and Samuri write. It's short, to the point.. Helps the story flow a bit better than dwelling on the area.
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:13pm
  • bone.

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    Its not my fault you wasted your time.
    I understand you're a serious writer and you were trying to help, babe. Stories are just for fun with me. I take my poems and lyrics seriously. But now you can use your time with others who take your comments with value.
    October 24th, 2011 at 11:03am
  • mynameisno

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    Hm.... it's something for me to mull over. Thank you again for your comment, though.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:54am
  • mynameisno

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    Thank you so much for the feedback! I am glad that you gave me criticism, and I will consider it while writing. I am not one for super heavy detail, however.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:45am
  • KiyleexKilljoy

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    i'm really bad with details, but it's more of like the person is me. (:
    so i'm about to start college for professional writing, so i can get help with my suck-ish details in all my stories. lmao.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:40am
  • pan12

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    Thank you so much for the comment. It will help me a lot. I'm just making a four-shot series right now. Thank you so much. :)
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:24am
  • bone.

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    Thanks for the comment buddy but I don't like long descriptions. I'm impatient and get bored easily with them. I dont put alot of effort into my writing because I dont take it too seriously and don't want to spend time doing so. I'll improve my writing if I wish but its just fine the way it is. I'd read your story but it doesn't interest me and I'd probably get bored. Have a good day, babe.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:11am
  • Simba's A Caveman

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    Hello! Thank you for your feedback on my story. I started reading your book The Old Religion, but its very difficult to do so on my cellular device. So whenever I have internet access I shall read it.
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:27am
  • a depth of pure blue

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    thanks...i guess? I am not going to change the way it's written because it's not a written story, it's actually what happens to me, and i've been writing it every so often, so i can't just add details because i don't remember exactly how things were when it happened.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • LifesLegend

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    They are similiar but they are not the same. I attend a methodis church which isa branch of christianity.
    October 23rd, 2011 at 06:51pm